Siobhan B Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 Story Title: Do you Follow your Heart or your Head? Type of story: Medium/Long Fic Main Characters: Brax, Charlie and others BTTB rating: T Genre: Romance, Secrets, Drama Does story include spoilers: No, if it does i'll warn at the beginning of that chapter Any warnings: Will warn before each chapter Summary: Charlie and Brax's relationship. The struggles that they face when people find out! How will they react and will Charlie lose her job? Will their relationship survive the road ahead Sorry it's vague i haven't really got the whole fic plotline finished yet Setting: Brax has got stabbed my Jake, but no one knows about Brax and Charlie's relationship. “Hey, House free, if you’re interested! Xx”. Charlie sent this message to Brax; she had to put that last bit in, just to tease him a little bit. Although Brax was far better at the sexy teasing she had to have her own bit of fun too. She was sitting on the sofa watching t.v. although there was nothing that interesting on, Charlie was wearing her cream dressing gown and night dress, she knew that Brax thought she looked sexy in it and she saw nothing wrong with a little bit of temptation. She was up from six o’clock that morning, she couldn’t sleep. She had the morning off and everyone was out of the house, she knew that Brax would jump at the invition and the thought of that made her become really exicited. She had a shower and left her hair wet so that he would think that she was only up out of the bed and just had a shower. Charlie poured herself a mug of fresh coffee she then decided that the just of out bed look wasn’t a good idea she didn’t what him thinking that she was lazy. She walked into her room and picked up a heavy pile of books and put them on the living room table. She was going to do some study for the detectives exam. “When you said come over I didn’t quite think you meant for a study date, Charlie.” Leah had left the front door open to let air in. Charlie jumped, she heard Brax come in. He laughed at her reaction. He had his smile on his face a smile that he only gave ‘his girl’ Charlie. “Daydreaming about me again” He said kissing Charlie on the lips and then her neck “Feeling a bit cocky today are we?” She playfully replied “well I’m sorry to burst your bubble, but I don’t think about you all the time.” Brax pulled a disappointed face. He pretended to be hurt by her reply. “No?” He ased “NO, not all the time” Brax wrabbed his arms around Charlies thin waste, and then crushed her body against his then kissed her fiercly. Charlie let out a slight moan, She tried to pull away to ask him how he was. But each time she tried he’d kiss her with more passion. She knew his wasn’t letting go in a hurry. “I don’t…..think so” he muttered between kisses “You don’t think so what?” “You fussing over me and these so called stab wounds” She squeeked playfully as Brax moved his fixation onto her jaw line and neck. “Brax” “Okay fine” Brax said as he said as he backed her up against the wall. “I’m fine, No pain, Wounds healing nicely, Sid said I can soon take the bandage off. “Happy now?” “Nope” She said playfully, trying to lighten the mood again. Brax kissed her with as much passion as he could. “Okay, Getting there” She teased. “Oh well then I guess I’m gonna have to try harder.” He said as he took off her dressing gown. “Charlie, baby, I’m nearly disapointed that you’re not in your uniform” He joked as he pushed her onto the bed. “What will you do if….if….i pass the dectectives exam, Mr. Braxton?” He laughed secretly he always thought that it was sexy when Charlie called him Mr.Braxton. They heard Charlie’s phone go off in the living room. “Leave it” Brax ordered her playfully. “Yes, sir” Charlie replied as they continued to teasingly remove each others clothes. Meanwhile.. There was a light knock on the door. Neither Charlie nor Brax heard it. It was 10 o’clock and Leah was home after her dentist’s appointment. “Oh hello, you okay?” Leah asked the person standing at the door “Em..Yes, I was just looking for Charlie Buckton, is she in?” “Yea, she should be. Maybe she’s in the shower, come on in, I’ll get her” Next time… Who is it that is with Leah?? Will they discover Brax and Charlie’s secret realtionship?? I’m sorry if this is a bit boring it’s my first fanfiction but stick with it, it’s gonna get better I promise. Please REVIEW this with your opinions I’d LOVE to hear what you think about it and hear your idea’s on what you think is gonna happen next. I’ll update soon!!
Lucii Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 Love it so far! Love the way you've wrote Charlie and Brax's relationship Wondering who the guy is with Leah can't wait for more x
Siobhan B Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 Love it so far! Love the way you've wrote Charlie and Brax's relationship Wondering who the guy is with Leah can't wait for more x Wow thanks so much Lucii you're my first reviewer and i really wasn't expecting the review to be that good! I hope to upload chapter 2 very soon so i promise you won't be waiting to long to see who it is that's at the door
totally Posted August 15, 2011 Report Posted August 15, 2011 It is really good! I would love to read more! Thank you for this!
elikell Posted August 16, 2011 Report Posted August 16, 2011 A wonderful start. I honestly can't wait to see where you take this next. Love Charlie and Brax's relationship and how you've written it. Very intested in seeing who's at the door with Leah... Interested in seeing what Charlie does about her job if it all comes to that. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update when you can please
lozlovesh&a Posted August 16, 2011 Report Posted August 16, 2011 I wonder who's at the door... please continue. good so far.
Dingo x Posted August 16, 2011 Report Posted August 16, 2011 Great work. Hmm.. can't wait to see who is at the door. XD Can't wait for more. (: Please update soon. xx
Guest Posted August 16, 2011 Report Posted August 16, 2011 Great work Wonder who's at the door please update soon
Chickiboomxx Posted August 16, 2011 Report Posted August 16, 2011 Great start! I'm loving it so far I wonder who's at the door.... Looking forward to more! Please update soon xx
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