Red Ranger 1 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Posted June 15, 2011 (edited) Wow!Good start, I like this fic, it's something different.Looking forward to seeing where you take it! Edited July 31, 2011 by QUIET ACHIEVER Quote
elikell Posted June 16, 2011 Report Posted June 16, 2011 Great start. Can't wait to see where you take this. You have a lot of interesting ideas happening here. Update soon please Quote
pembie Posted June 16, 2011 Report Posted June 16, 2011 Wow I like the twist to this story more soon please Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 16, 2011 Report Posted June 16, 2011 Wow. A brilliant first chapter! Absolutely amazing! I look forward to reading more & seeing where you take this. Love Carina xxx Quote
pembie Posted June 17, 2011 Report Posted June 17, 2011 Very Good update Who will Belle pick hmmmmmmmm I was on Javaier's side until he started quoting Shakespeare thats just seems very cheesy but maybe that's because I'm a guy and Shakespeare really stresses me out Aden seems like Belle's safe bet While Javaier seems like her exicting optoin but is that what she really needs I don't know where your going to go with this Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 17, 2011 Report Posted June 17, 2011 Well, if Belle chooses Javier, then I"ll take Aden. Although I am hoping Belle wants Aden. Who wouldn't want him? Another absolutely amazing, perfect chapter. I look forward to more & seeing where you take this. Love Carina xxx Quote
Lucii Posted June 17, 2011 Report Posted June 17, 2011 ADEN ADEN ADEN ADEN! pick Aden Belle! I love this so far, beautifully written but I don't think this Javier guys gonna give Belle up! Write more sooon xx Quote
Zetti Posted June 19, 2011 Report Posted June 19, 2011 Ah good start Laura. Pick Aden!! Zetti xx Quote
Zetti Posted June 20, 2011 Report Posted June 20, 2011 Ah she kissed Javier. I sense trouble. For some reason I can see Belle ending all alone with no one. I loved the chapter, the dialogue and interaction was perfect. Well done and I look forward to more. xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 20, 2011 Author Report Posted June 20, 2011 Oh boy, Belle's getting herself in a mess, isn't she?The fates really do seem to be toying with her... Quote
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