Chester-Sam Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 I can't wait to find out what seems to have happened with this Matt person, I'm very curious Loved the Charlie/Ruby stuff as always, you should replace the H&A writers, you'd do a way batter job! Awaiting your next update, - Sam! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Brilliant update, once again I love how you write Charlie and Ruby's relationship its just so lovely It made me laugh when the guys at the station thought Charlie was a man! Cant wait to see (or read ) what their reaction is going to be when they see she's a woman lol. Looking forward to reading more about Charlie and Matt and what happened with them, its very intriguing! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Cooooool fic !!! In Chapter 5 [will scope out Ch 6 tonight], I especially loved ….. “We’re parked near the bush. Just hide” Charlie smiled “Mum!” Ruby gasped “Isn’t that illegal?” “Only if an officer catches you” Charlie smiled as she began to remove her skirt and “Oh god, sorry” Charlie said as soon as she felt the contact of another person “Not god. Angelo. And it was my fault” Angelo smiled as he slid backward Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Oh gosh.I am suddenly extremely intrigued about what the story here is.That conversation near the start of the chapter left me thinking that maybe Charlie had a miscarriage but then it sounded like something happened to Ruby as well..?You have really got my attention here! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Great chapter! Loved it Loved the Charlie/Ruby parts Cracked up when the guys thought Charlie was a man! Can't wait to read their reactions when they see he is a woman! Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Wow! That update was great. You need to update soon - so many questions that need to be answered! Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rach Loves H&A Posted January 29, 2011 Report Share Posted January 29, 2011 Great Update!!! Looking forward to Charlie starting at the station and both of them making friends in the bay. Update Soon!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Looking forward to more of this, especially scenes like the one that included this line ..... “So you do listen to me when I bring work home with me” Charlie smiled as she looked to Ruby Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Awesome update I loved the stuff at the station then Martha and Jack's conversation. Poor Charlie! She seems so worried about it coming out that she is Ruby's mother. Judging by her convo with Ruby things must have been said in the city when people found out... Loved the stuff with Leah. I can see they will be good friends soon And I had to laugh when she bumped into Angelo again And Leah's reaction when Ruby called Charlie Mum! Oh....looking forward to seeing what happens there and if Charlie would go into the truth so soon, probs not. Once again, love Charlie and Ruby's relationship. So lovely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rach Loves H&A Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 Great Update!!! Poor Charlie worried about what everything is going to think about her being Ruby's mum. Liked the interaction with Angelo even though it was short, I hope they get to know each other better. Update Soon!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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