Please Be Mine (by Jen) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Saw this yesterday and kept meaning to read it but kept forgetting.Some nice tension in that opening chapter, it felt like Aden was deliberately winding Geoff up and making him uncomfortable but then you got the slightest hint that there was a bit of sincerity in there...Looking forward to seeing how it develops.

[Scotcaz22]

This is really good!

Looking forward to the next update!

(PS. the link to Reading Between the Lines is not working, just thought I would let you know. )

[Anaya]

OMG you posted! You posted. You posted. You posted!! *does a little happy dance*

And me? I am still FAIL! Even after I've been such a sucky pupil I get myself a dedication for this fic. Really? You are way too awesome. *ships off some freshly made, rainbow sprinkles covered, gaden-shaped cookies just for Jen*

To make up for my suckiness:

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

I promise I shall never, ever, ever neglect Geoff&Aden again.

10 down. 995 to go. You'll get the rest at detention (the one I still haven't attended).

Now on to the amazing-ness that is this Gaden fic. You already know what I think of it, but seeing as I'm here I might aswell say it all again.

Your writing style is so descriptive & this only helps the reader build a more fuller picture when reading it. I love that you've written it from Geoff's P.O.V. You've really captured him well in this fic and he's written perfectly in character. And It feels like I'm riding the wave of emotions/feelings that Geoff is going through with him. Aden is also written very well. The tension in that Gaden interaction is so tangible. Just spot on. <33

And now. Geoff&Aden working on the trawler K-I-S-S-I-N-G. *Is all flailing & sighing like a silly little fangirl*

[Red Ranger 1]

Liked the chat between them at the start, with Geoff's naive enthusiasm and petulant side spilling out.Nice twist on the capsicum scene.

[Red Ranger 1]

Really nicely written, you can just feel the sexual tension between them.Liked the waitress' knowing look...I could just imagine Aden responding like that.

[CHARLENE2009]

oh my god another great chapter

geoff getting angry _ glad he called over to Adens

Poor Aden crying _ wish i was there to Make it all better LOL

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh boy.Well, Geoff's life seems to be getting complicated on several different levels.And Aden seems to have even more issues...Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

[Red Ranger 1]

Wow, that was rather intense.Geoff summed it up well that they're teetering on the edge of something.

[Red Ranger 1]

Loved the banter between Geoff and Annie and Geoff taking his time working out what Ruby was getting at.Geoff and Aden's...whatever continues to have pull, I see.

[Red Ranger 1]

Wow!I really loved all of Geoff's thoughts there.The way he thought Aden was rejecting him when he really just seemed to be trying to do what was best for him.Nice of him to go out to the farm with him.Was definitely not expecting the kiss(es).Looking forward to seeing where this goes.