Red Ranger 1 Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Those flashbacks were really terrifying.Like the way everyone's supporting Tony, hoping to see the meeting between Gina and Brenda. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzard18 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Whoa, that was powerful! But it was a really good chapter Do we find out more about where Tony got the gun from or do we focus more on the Holden children's past? To answer your questions, suzannelgnz - 1) Do we find out more about where Tony got the gun from? - All I can say is that we have not heard the last of Doug, the guy who stole the gun and sold it to Tony in exchange for a thousand dollars. This will become a topic of discussion between Jack, Richard and Charlie in a later chapter in this fic. 2) Do we focus more on the Holden children's past? - I am pleased to say that later in this fic is a chapter with the title known as "The Story." That chapter is entirely based on the Holden's children's past, but mostly focusing on Tony, rather than Gina. "The Story" was actually my favourite chapter to write, and I'm sure you and the other readers will enjoy it, once we get up to that part. I don't want to give away too much, but all I can say is, like I've said before, there is still plenty more to come, and every character in this fic will somehow be involved either in the main storyline, or other little storylines that I mentioned in the first post. Hope I answered your question. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Nice to have a bit of a respite after all the drama and emotion(especially since it sounds like we'll be getting more of that next chapter...).Loved the fluff between Jack and Martha and some nice banter between Charlie and Watson as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Oh gosh, wasn't expecting Tony to collapse like that.Nice bit of banter between Ruby and Xavier at the start.Charlie leaving Watson behind was a funny moment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Whoa! I hope Tony is ok Kent better not return to the bay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Good that Tony's okay, hopefully Rachel's lie won't come back to haunt them.Jack and Martha didn't notice the ambulance...Yep, that's very Summer Bay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 That little scene of Lucas outside the school was really funny.Looks like everyone's getting up to speed, hopefully Kent won't cause too much more trouble. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Loved the spat between Ruby and Xavier, that could be really interesting.Bit curious about why Hugo was looking for Gina, looking forward to more of this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzard18 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Loved the spat between Ruby and Xavier, that could be really interesting.Bit curious about why Hugo was looking for Gina, looking forward to more of this. If you remember a few chapters back, Hugo and Xavier were being bossed around by Gina to clean up the Holden house. In the Surf Club, when Martha suggests Hugo could help clean up and Alf tells him to use the Vacuum cleaner, Hugo thought that his mum was there, getting Alf to boss him around (in other words, Hugo is disappointed to be cleaning again) - supposed to be some kind of humorous moment there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Loved the spat between Ruby and Xavier, that could be really interesting.Bit curious about why Hugo was looking for Gina, looking forward to more of this. If you remember a few chapters back, Hugo and Xavier were being bossed around by Gina to clean up the Holden house. In the Surf Club, when Martha suggests Hugo could help clean up and Alf tells him to use the Vacuum cleaner, Hugo thought that his mum was there, getting Alf to boss him around (in other words, Hugo is disappointed to be cleaning again) - supposed to be some kind of humorous moment there. Ah!Okay, I was obviously a bit dim there... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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