Red Ranger 1 Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 Good start, you've captured all the characters really well.I noticed the synopsis in the advertising thread and it sounds really interesting. Oh-and if it helps work out whether there's any spoilers or not, over here we already know that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charmed60 Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 I really like this fic, there's loads going on with loads of different characters and I'm intrigued where you're taking this! You've captured the family scenes well, I liked the little brother, sister interaction between Tony and Gina and the friendly banter between Rachel and Julie. I also like the way you've got the whole community planning together to do a surprise for Rachel, it's really nice. I look forward to the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 Another nice chapter, loved the interaction between Alf and Colleen and the shop assistant thinking Tony and Roman were a couple was laugh-out-loud funny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted October 15, 2009 Report Share Posted October 15, 2009 I'm really enjoying this fic, and I'm especially looking forward to the proposal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Nice chapter, I liked the parallel scenes of Tony and Rachel's friends getting them ready.Romantic gesture from Tony but if she doesn't say "Yes" it's gonna be really awkward... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charmed60 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Aww Loved the proposal I really really hope she says yes, she should do right, she is having his baby?? I love how quickly you update this and I liked the scene between Jack and Tony do, really good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Great update The parallel scenes were a really great idea, however I would have liked to hear a little more about the get together Julie had for Rach's birthday. Rachel has to say yes, she's pregnant with Tony's baby and it's a huge milestone for her anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Great proposal, great update. Thank you. I hope she will say yes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzard18 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Glad to hear some positive comments from everyone. Since I've already finished this fic on Word a long time ago (It's a long fic - a total of about 59 chapters), I might get into the habit of posting one chapter per day (Mon to Fri.) Some of you may be wondering when the main storyline (about the character's past - hence the title) will start in the fic. That will be coming soon, but first I'm just launching some of the other little storylines (i.e. the robbery, the proposal) that will also carry on throughout the fic. But all I will reveal to you guys for now is that a small clue, which will have a significant role in the main storyline, can be found in Chapter One. And finally, as a special treat (for those who can't wait for the next chapter) here are some fun little bits and pieces to look forward to, and you can discuss this amongst yourselves if you wish. 1) Who "Borrowed" Charlie's lipstick? 2) Has Gina developed the "Irene Robert's sayings" syndrome? 3) A great time to have a camera phone handy. 4) Jack Vs Rachel in "Who makes the best Breakfast" 5) Long lost twins in the Bay? Maybe? 6) If Tony became the next Prime Minister of Australia..... All this, plus Rachel's response to the proposal will be answered in the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charmed60 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 Wow that all sounds so exciting! Thank you for posting, one update a day sounds good to me I'm rubbish with trying to figure out clues so I won't even try and guess but will just enjoy it as it all unravels. Really looking forward to hearing Rachel's response to the proposal and Rachel vs Jack in who makes the best breakfast sounds funny Rachel's got a bad reputation for cooking in the show hehe. Gina becoming the new Irene sounds interesting as does Tony as prime minister? Really looking forward to the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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