Red Ranger 1 Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Open mouth time.That was a massive shock, did not see it coming at all.Liked Irene trying to keep everything under control at the start.Really want to know what happens next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charmed60 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Was not expecting Tony!!! Oh dear poor Rachel and on their anniversary! She'll be at home with a dinner cooked waiting for him and he's off trying to kill his Dad. Brilliant shock there, he was acting a bit suspicious a couple of chapters back but I never expected him. Looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Nice and intense.I did wonder for a moment whether Kent was actually lying to Tony or whether he genuinely thought he'd killed Brenda. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charmed60 Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Woooah that was an amazing chapter, you wrote that really really well poor Tony I'm looking forward to seeing Rachel's response when she finds out what happened. The plot follow up was interesting to read, there were so many clues in there I didn't even pick up on! Looking forward to the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Gosh.Shocking ending.I was hoping he wouldn't go through with it.Was hoping Rachel would pick up on something when she phoned Tony, shame she didn't realise.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 Well, thank goodness Tony didn't shoot him.But it sounds like an even more difficult journey has just started... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 I'm glad Tony seems to be getting back to his old self a bit after his outburst and understand what he's done.Hopefully he won't get into too much trouble. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Some strong emotions doing the rounds there.Wonder if Tony really doesn't remember where he got the gun from and indeed where he did get it from. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 ^^ i totally agree, the emotions are very strong atm, and they are coming from so many different people. I am looking forward to the dialogue between Gina and Brenda, i wonder if she will come to the bay with Gina and find a place to live with her and the Boys since Tachel's baby arrives soon i'm also looking forward to Tony's memories starting to return in regard to his childhood and the events of that night. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Whoa, that was powerful! But it was a really good chapter Do we find out more about where Tony got the gun from or do we focus more on the Holden children's past? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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