Jamey-Maria Posted June 23, 2006 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2006 (edited) What on earth?!?! Jack don't be so stupid! Of course Lauren is up to something, you should of kicked her out on her backside the minute you opened the door! Lauren did you ever stop to think that the reason you don't have any freinds is because you went around trying to break up a happy couple......... dumbass! And now for this James character......... seems pretty shady to me, don't like the look of this. Great chapter, please update soon! Edited June 23, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted June 23, 2006 Report Share Posted June 23, 2006 Love it. Cant wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted June 23, 2006 Report Share Posted June 23, 2006 Bite her Martha. Bite her. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bell Posted June 24, 2006 Report Share Posted June 24, 2006 oh my god what is happening? i dont like this James me thinks but its intreging... ... so please update sooon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted June 27, 2006 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2006 (edited) I"m sure Martha will have no problem falling for you, as she already knows you Lauren replied. Next Time: - Will Martha do something she will regret for her whole life? When I read the first line i thought Lauren your an idiot! There is absolutley no way, Martha wouldn't do that, plus who would want to when you have Jack?!?! Then i read the last line !!! Please update soon, although i'm not sure i want to read what happens next:( Great chapter as usual! Edited June 27, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 omg martha plz dont anything stupid...plz dont fall for james' charms...no matter how good looking he is...u cant cheat on jack...prove to lauren that u and jack are unbreakable oh god im tlkn to a fictional character...these fan fics are sooo good...its driving me crazy... keep up the good work..and plz continue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shortie_689 Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 wats the difference between jenny and lauren in the first part u talk about jenny but then refer to jenny as lauren... slightly confused good story never the less... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 (edited) hey sorry to confuse u i have now edited the first part so all of them say lauren, i named her jenny when i was writing the fic but then i decided to change it sorry for all the confusion Edited June 28, 2006 by Jacksthehottest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 yeh i noticed u calling lauren jenny...hehe...but good fic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted June 28, 2006 Report Share Posted June 28, 2006 (edited) Great fic! Martha you dare and i'll be on a plane to aussie land quicker than you can say Nicole Holden. Edited June 28, 2006 by xxNicolexx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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