Footprints (by adellejefferiesxox) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Wow.That was really emotional and really sad.(No kidding.That made me sad.)Really well-written and conceived, well done.

[adellejefferiesxox]

I kinda stuffed up because how would Aden know Belle was gonna die, he was planning on killing himself and he was gonna do it by injecting himself with Morphine. But what I stuffed up was how would Aden know Belle was gonna die that day I mean why would someone be carrying a syringe and Morphine in their pockets. I"m an idioit.

Thanks Red Ranger btw.

[Laura]

In loving memory of

Isabelle Taylor – Jefferies died on 13 June 2009, 4:00pm

Aden Jefferies died on13 June 2009, 4:00pm

I'm presuming you mean Belle but her real name is actually Susan Taylor though isn't it??

[Tiammi]

OMG I totally agree with Red Ranger 1 , I actually cried through a lot of it you write some really emotional stuff Lily .

You are a very talented writer

In loving memory of

Isabelle Taylor – Jefferies died on 13 June 2009, 4:00pm

Aden Jefferies died on13 June 2009, 4:00pm

^^ Isn't her name Susan ?

[adellejefferiesxox]

Yep Susan is her name (Isabelle is prettier!!)

[Red Ranger 1]

I kinda stuffed up because how would Aden know Belle was gonna die, he was planning on killing himself and he was gonna do it by injecting himself with Morphine. But what I stuffed up was how would Aden know Belle was gonna die that day I mean why would someone be carrying a syringe and Morphine in their pockets. I"m an idioit.

Well...love makes you do strange things sometimes.Maybe Aden was a Boy Scout.(Be prepared.)

[Scotcaz22]

Awww....that made me cry....

A very nice and well-written story.

Thank you for sharing

[adellejefferiesxox]

You're welcome