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I loved the name! It's so fitting and perfect! The whole chapter was perfect!

I can't believe there's only one or two chapters left. I really cannot stop reading this fic. Everytime the chapter ends, I just want more. I've probably read each chapter about 3 times already just to get a fix of your writing :P

But seriously, that was absolutely beautiful. I loved how you described both of their feelings at seeing their daughter and being with her. I just hope that everything stays perfect!

xoxo

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That was so beautiful... loved the name! I get the feeling you might be using life experiences to write this fic as you are always so accurately descriptive it's so easy to imagine the scenes you write...

I can't wait for the next chapter but i really don't want it to end... it's so good!

Update soon! :D

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