mk1diva Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 cool didn't have to wait long at all! Its a very good start not liking the arguement tho between adelle but as with your other fic you have this great thing of making it all better.... xoxox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H&A_diehard Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Tis a good start. Have to agree about not liking the bickering but I have faith in your writing skills to make it all better. I'm impressed how quickly you got this story up btw. Next update please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAM27# Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 YAY the sequel!!!!! Yeah we didnt have to wait long thank god!!!!! I hate the waiting!!! Great start.....the arguing not so great but I will live with that as it makes an interesting story!!!! Never thought I would see Aden this focused on his studies!! But its a nice change!!! Shows he has plans for the future but it looks like it could lead to trouble for Adelle..hopefully they can work it out!!! Can't wait for more!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Great start!! You are so quick to update I'm not worried about the bickering, coz I know you will fix it Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H&A_diehard Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 (edited) Great start!! You are so quick to update I'm not worried about the bickering, coz I know you will fix it Update soon What are you doing in here? Get updating, your fic has fallen off the front page. Edited September 21, 2008 by H&A_diehard Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 YAY the sequal is up already!!!! whoop love it, even though Adelle had a fight i know you will make it better, although i hope its not a mattie/ric problem with all the uni stuff i am sooo looking foward to how you write this Fic. Aden becoming a consellor is brilliant. update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I loved the start! The dialogue was so spot on with all of the characters! Aden and Belle's fight at the end was just like i'd have imagined! It was great and i can't wait for the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 Yay! The sequel... The fight was sad but realistic. Good start. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted September 21, 2008 Report Share Posted September 21, 2008 I'm glad you guys have commented saying that it was realistic. I really didn't want to go OOC because I like trying to stay in character, but somehow I think over the time that I've been writing these fics, I kind of go off on my own tangent lol. Update should be posted tomorrow. I start back at uni tomorrow, so no promises, but I will do my best! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 (edited) Great start!! I can't wait for an update. Edited September 22, 2008 by **Julie** Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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