stephyrose4 Posted October 29, 2008 Report Share Posted October 29, 2008 God Jacks son is a total little asshole! Seriously .. He has no respect. More please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alias Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 CHAPTER 5 In the morning Jack hit Nat over the head "Get up now" Jack said "Oh what" he said sitting up looking at the clock which said 9:15 He sighed "You gotta be kidding" "No, now i'm gonna take you to the school and see about enrolling you, You do go to school don't you" Nat smiled and gave a slight smug laugh "No" he told him They walked into the school "Martin" Jack said "Yes" Martin replied "This is my son Nat, how do i go about enrolling him here "Come with me" "So where did you go to school before here?" Msrtin asked "I didn't" Martin frowned "He noticed a strong glare in Martin's eyes "So how old are you Nat" "16" Nat replied "And yet never been to school" Nat turned to Jack and then to Martin again "I don't like you" Nat told Martin "You rude, judging andyou are a jerk" "Nat" Jack interupted as Nat's phone range with a heavy metal rock ring tone. He sighed "What" he said answering his phone "Nat hang up" Jack told him Nat mimed shut up. "She' what" Nat said to the person on the phone "Is she ok?" "How bad is she hurt?" "I'll be there as quick as i can" Nat hung up and walked out of Martin's office. "Nat" Jack called following him "That was nan" he said "What's wrong" "Mum's there her boyfriend belted her andtook off with all her money and somehow sold the house from under her or something. I told her i'd be there soon" "I'll give a ride, atleast you'll get there quicker" CHAPTER 6 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 Oooh soft side of Nat coming out maybe... maybe hes a mummy's boy!! cnt wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alias Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 CHAPTER Jack and Nat were driving to his nan's country club "I'm sorry" Nat said looking out the window "What" Jack replied He turned his heard and looked at Jack "I haven't been a very nice person to you or to Martha, i probably because i was forced to come live with you" "What, Your mum said you wanted to meet me" Jack told him Nat frowned "I didn't know about you until i was given a plane ticket" "Why were you forced to come and see me" "Mum didn't swant her boyfriend getting upset all the time and i was the cause of that" They pulled up "Do you want me to come in with you" "No it's ok?" "Hey" Jack said as Nat was about to shut the car door "What?" "Play nice Nat" Jack said" "Me" he said and smiled "Oh Nathan, she so scared that Dumill could have had hired some to do some to you" Glenda told him as he walked inside "Oh my god" Britney said and hugged him "I've missed you so much" She said "What happened"Nat asked "He took all my money and sold the house and..." She took her sunglasses off "And this" she said showing him her black eye Nat reached over and grabbed a tissue "Mum did you know i've lodst count of how my black eyes i've had in the past, and did you also know start off redish then yellow purple making it appear blck" He threw the tissue at her "Wipe it off" he said angrily She picked up the tissue and wiped the make of her eye. "Non of what you just told me happened did it" "Please Nat you have to understand, i love and i want you to come home with me" Nat walked outside while Britney followed him fake crying "Please don't go" "I can't believe i felt sorry you" He opened Jack's car door "Can we go" CHAPTER 7 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 31, 2008 Report Share Posted October 31, 2008 naughty britney!! but go nat for telling her straight and woo nat apologised... hope he is now nice to martha and jack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alias Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 CHAPTER 7 Jack and Martha heard a knock on the door and Jack up to open it "Britney" he said opening it "Jack, is Nat here" she asked pushing her way in "I would have said home, but this isn't his home" she told him "What do you want?" Jack asked "I came to appologise to Nat again" "What happened between you two, i finally got him to settle down and be nice too me and now he's gone wild again punching me and being very crude to Martha" Jack told me "Well maybe if you tell me where he is i could calm him down" "I don't know where he is" "Well, i'm gonna go, i have place to be people to see, call me when he gets in" She grabbed a marker texta of the table and unbuttoned jacks shirt and wrote her number on his chest "Ooooooooooooohhhhhhh, got firm all over" she said rubbing her hand up and bhis body and ass "Kisses" shesaid walking out and stopped at the door "Oh Jack you in that police uniform, very sexy" she said and gave a flirtish laugh and left CHAPTER 8 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
standbyme Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 what a slag hitting on Jack infront of his wife Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted November 5, 2008 Report Share Posted November 5, 2008 no way britney is a bitch lol love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alias Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 CHAPTER 8 Nat sat on the beach staring at the water. "Beautiful isnt it" Britney said "I heard you were in town" Nat replied not looking at her "Yeah, you didn't call" "What you mean with tha number you scribbled on Jack's chest before groping him" He turned and loked at her "Martha told me" he told her "Yeah she probably made it soulnd worse than i was" "Yeah right" he said softly "Anyway i didn't come here to talk about Jack, i've came to tell you i'm divorcing Dumill and quitting modeling" she told him "Why?" "For you silly, i thought i'd come live in this small town with you and you could stay and see Jack alot more" "You hate small towns" he replied "And you could get an education like go to school something you've never done before" "Mum, you hate living with me, you've told me that once and you will probably tell me again" "I know but that's all gonna change because i'm here with you now..." Nat cut her off "You didn't want me in you or Dumill's life, i was making it complicated" he said "Nat..." "You said all those horrible things to me" "Look, i want to change" Britney told him "Now i gotta go so kisses" she ssaid and got up and left CHAPTER 9 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted November 6, 2008 Report Share Posted November 6, 2008 aww i hope they can work it out... but anyway it'll be interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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