dee83 Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 Great so far glad Nat finally told Jack what happened to him its for the best Can`t wait for the next chapter update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alias Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 CHAPTER 15 "Hey Martha" Nat said "Where have you been" Martha asked "Ruby and i went to see if everyone was ok because we heard what happened at the formal" Nat told her "Why isn't your phone on" she asked "Mum kept calling so i turned it off" Nat stopped and realized Jack wasn't in the room "Where's Jack" he asked He relized Martha had been crying "Is everything ok, whens Jack coming home" Nat asked her "Jack's not coming home" Martha said crying "Did you guys have a fight" "Tony and i started to worry when Jack hadn't called or been home so Tony went looking when he found him it was too late..." "Why was he too late what happened" Nat asked confused "Jack's dead Nat he was shot in the heart and when Tony found him it was too late there was nothing anyone could do" Nat sat down "Do you know who shot him" Nat said "No" Martha rtold him "Where is he now i wanna see him" Nat said he was more angry than upset "He's at the hospital" Martha told him sitting next to him He got up walked out the door CHAPTER 16 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alias Posted January 21, 2009 Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 CHAPTER 16 Nat sat at the hosppital with his head in his hands crying when Britney walked up to him "I just heard it's just awful" Britney said sitting next to him and putting her arm around him He rested his head in her shoulder "It's not fair" Nat said "I know death never is" Britney told him "Um Nat" she said "Now that Jack's dead and all which don't get me wrong is very sad and awful, but ddo you think that now you can come home with me and Dumill now i mean there's no reason for you to be here" "Jack hasn't been dead 24 hours" Nat took his off her shoulder and raised his voice a little "I was just stating the truth" Britney told him "Get out of here" "Nat" "Go now" Nat told her "Ok well have a think about it then CHAPTER 17 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*caitie* Posted January 22, 2009 Report Share Posted January 22, 2009 that was awesome!! so sad hope nat doesn't go live with his mum update soon!! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alias Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 CHAPTER 17 Nat woke up and a bed that wasn't his and saw Martha lying next to him. "Oh my god" he thought quickly getting up and getting dressed. "Hello" he heard Ruby say "Ow" she said when pulled her outside by the arm. "Are you ok?" she asked "No" he replied looking down "What's wrong?" she asked "Promise me you wont tell anyone" he said walking out to the driveway "Sure" "I think i slept with Martha" Nat said "What" "What am i gonna do, i can't go back in there while she's there" Ruby was standing there with a puzzeled look on her face "Hello, friend in crisis" Nat said "Well what happened" "I don't know i just woke up next to her in her bed with a really big headache" "Ask her see if she remembers, who knows you could have just fell asleep and she carried you to the closest room" Ruby "And undressed me" "You were naked?" "No, i was in my boxers but that's not the point" "Just do as i said" Ruby told him CHAPTER 18 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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