Drew Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I totally forgot about this story! I read the next two chapters though, haven't read the lastest one... The dream! That made me chuckle. It seemed like there were alot of clues in there... Once the story is over it'll be good to go back to that dream chapter and read all the clues that you had planted. Although one thing that kept confusing me, were your original characters. I like them, Adam seems to be cemented in my brain the most, but with the others I'm confused to who they are and who they're related too etc... Is it possible to like write two lines on each character so it's easier for us to understand them? It may just be me, but it would help :D I'll hopefully read the latest chapter later tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Wow! That was intense. Aden and the nurse More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perry Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Thanks guys. Here's a little bit of info for you Drew. It's a bit confusing I know, mostly purposeful. I don't want you to know certain stuff about them as well. Adam Shaw: Been in the bay for almost a year is dating Paul Roberts and has a 7 year old daughter. Delilah 'Lila' Andretti: Adam's ex (Kaley's mother) Abandoned Kaley but recently returned Kaley Shaw: Adam's and Lila's daughter Paul Roberts: Irene's grandson (Finlay's oldest son) He's in a relationship with Adam. Shayne Parish: Angel's daughter. Olivia Fraser: Chloe's daughter, she returned in 2005 Irene fought for custody of her. Tinkerbell Campbell: Belle and Aden's daughter, stapdaughter to Geoff. Other things you're going to have to find out about for yourself by continuing to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 That's all I really wanted to know Just who was who and who was related and in a relationship etc with who... Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 WTF happened to Aden hahahaha. That was great imagery of him and the nurse, good descriptions there Are we going to find out what happened to Aden? On some level, I'm wishing that you never told us any clues about the big event because this story would have just kept me on my toes... I guess there's a chance also that it's not what we guessed, but all the signs are pointing towards it... Either way, can't wait until it happens. Another good chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perry Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 WTF happened to Aden hahahaha. It's not funny, that's my favourite character you're talking about. Do you know how hard it was for me to go there with him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Yeah, he's one of my favourite characters, it was just out of the blue that you went there with him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perry Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Why is it that we have to put our favourite characters through the most torture?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Because we just love writting them, and if we have screwed minds, they're most likely going to be screwed That's the most obvious way to put it. I hate writting my favourite characters being all lovey dovey, because you get no where with them, they need to have drama, because you feel for them when things go wrong; which makes you love them. The happy characters, I find hard to write, fic or original, there's not much you can do with them. Not sure if that make sense, but that's how I see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perry Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 I haven't given up on this fic just have assignments and exams to study for as well as work so I haven't updated in a while and I'm sorry but I've almost got t he next chapter finished and I may post it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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