Only Hope (by matticus01) - comments

[matticus01]

Comments guys?

[jack+martha=trooluvv]

Sad

That's all I can say...

What a sad story

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH *cries*

[Barbara]

That was soooooooooo sad! *wipes away tears*

At least, they had a final kiss and she died in his arms.

I'll be singing Only Hope for the rest of the night. Great song!

Great oneshot!

[matticus01]

thanks so much guys...

[Luc]

That was an amazing story. So sad. I'm not really a JnM fan, but that was an amazing story. Loved it.

[matticus01]

Thanks so much Luc and Barbara and Meggie...and anyone else who likes this one shot

[*caitie*]

Loved it!!!

It was very muchly awesome!!!

But very muchly sad too

Well done with it

:)

[valli]

Wow

Can I leave my comment like that? Nope, I'd have to report myself for spamming

Anyway, great descriptions in this oneshot. I didn't quite follow the lyrics, some parts were good, others weren't. Just my opinion though.

The text itself was a bit hard to read, not because it was bad, but because it was centred. Centred texts are generally harder to read, so try to stear away from those. (it was just some parts though)

But the text itself was great. The build-up to the shocking and sad ending was perfect. You really made the reader wanting to continue and that's how a oneshot should be So that's why my first word was wow.

All in all, a great text with a few things to improve

Edited April 4, 2008 by valli

[Indraa]

That is a wonderful story, wauw!

I love it, it's a great one shot!

[Pengzilla]

You killed her? Wow, you're mean.

Awww, a sad one shot.. but a good one! I liked how you began with her being cold and wanting his arms to warm her up.. and in the end he had his arms wrapped around her to warm her up. That was pretty sweet.

Well done!