Nightmare (by puja) - comments

[Jackieleanne]

Awww poor Jack glad thinking about Martha put a smile on his face again. Great start.

[Jamey-Maria]

Awww i love it already! Can't believe how many J&M fics there are (i love it!!!) That was a great chapter and i can't wait for you to update, poor Jack i wonder what's bugging him, i hope Martha can help;P

[bay girl]

Very nice. Hope you update soon.

[Jacksthehottest]

omg thats sooo good mplease continue can't wait for more

[linzie_mac01]

A great start, well done!

I like the story how its from Jacks POV, awww its good to know how he feels about Martha, and how he needs her. Hope she can help!

Can't wait for the next update!!

[Jackieleanne]

Awww sweet chapter, I sense something bad is going to happen to spoil Jack's perfect life.

[Jamey-Maria]

Awww i loved that chapter! Please update soon. One little question though, Were those holes in the cardigan like actual holes? I didn't get it, maybe i'm just sleep deprived as it is 1:12 over here!

[puja]

Awww i loved that chapter! Please update soon. One little question though, Were those holes in the cardigan like actual holes? I didn't get it, maybe i'm just sleep deprived as it is 1:12 over here!

Sorry, my description wasn't that good! Yeah, the holes are the actual designs on the cardigan. Sorry!

[tasha7905]

Brilliant so far, really sweet. I also think something bad is going to happen to wreck Jack's perfect life. Post more soon : )

[Nicom]

Aww! That's brilliantly written! Your description is fabulous!!

Well done! I'm loving this fic already! Please post more soon!