-michelle- Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 Very good. Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 Awww i loved that chapter! Please update soon. One little question though, Were those holes in the cardigan like actual holes? I didn't get it, maybe i'm just sleep deprived as it is 1:12 over here! Sorry, my description wasn't that good! Yeah, the holes are the actual designs on the cardigan. Sorry! No, no, no! Your description was excellent, i'm just an idiot who should be in bed, lol! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 Awww i loved that chapter! Please update soon. One little question though, Were those holes in the cardigan like actual holes? I didn't get it, maybe i'm just sleep deprived as it is 1:12 over here! Sorry, my description wasn't that good! Yeah, the holes are the actual designs on the cardigan. Sorry! No, no, no! Your description was excellent, i'm just an idiot who should be in bed, lol! I'm saying nothing... Lol! Just kidding! lol Couldn't resist.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 (edited) Nicole you are a very nasty person, lol! Trying to draw attention to the fact that i'm not that bright..... Edited May 26, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 great start i can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackieleanne Posted May 26, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 Uh oh, I see trouble brewing for Martha and Jack. I can't wait to read more, good chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 Loving it. Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 ohh it's getting very interesting now can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 Evil Mason. Jack you better protect Martha!! how adorable was Macca and Marthas scene? ( wish my brothers cared liked that lol ) Anyway Good story! keep up the good writing. can't wait for the next chapter plz updat sooon. xSianx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_jessik Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 Mason watched like a hawk as he saw Jack touch, kiss and make Martha laugh. His facial expression came across and evil and determined. He was still in the same position he was when Martha left- stood up straight. He then turned around towards his friends and raised his head. The look of evilness remained as he quietly whispered: “…I want her…” LEAVE her & Jack alone you freak!!!! I love your writing puja, its very detailed & descriptive. Thanks for the update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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