~Rosey~ Posted August 6, 2007 Report Share Posted August 6, 2007 Sorry its so short, but I have to go to bed Chapter 4 Martha picked up the stick and looked at it. A blue line appeared on it. She was pregnant. She felt like she was on top of the world right now. So far, everything in this relationship had gone smoothly. They were both deeply, madly and truly in love with each other. Martha couldn't wait to tell him. She sat at home for what felt like hours, where in actual fact, it was only 45 minutes, until the love of her life finally arrived home. He walked in, and Martha walked up to him, holding the pregnancy stick up in a little bag, and smiling. Jacks jaw dropped to the ground. He couldn't believe what Martha was holding up. After having a crappy day at work, this was just what he needed to cheer him up. They hugged, Jack swinging Martha around in his arms, squealing with delight. They both walked in to the lounge room, sitting down and kissing "I cant believe that is really happening" exclaimed Jack "And you think I can? I was too scared to look at the stick first, just incase I thought wrong." She replied, giggling at her own thoughts. "You go have a shower, and I'll get dinner on the go" Martha told him. Jack did what he was told. He had a quick shower and got dressed in the bathroom. He came out and called out Martha's name, and got no reply. Maybe, he thought, she didn't here me… He walked out into the kitchen, and saw her lying on the ground, unconscious, with severe burns on her face "Oh god!" Jack said, reaching for the phone to call Triple 0 Up next: What happened to Martha? And will Baby Holden be okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted August 6, 2007 Report Share Posted August 6, 2007 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Rosey that was mean Of corse Martha and baby Holden will be ok they can't not be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted August 6, 2007 Report Share Posted August 6, 2007 Baby Holden has to be ok.! Poor Martha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted August 6, 2007 Report Share Posted August 6, 2007 You were right Rosey, I didnt like that How could you do that to Martha!!! And when she was pregnant aswell Meanie! Cute chapters though, made me giggle in parts looking forward to more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted August 8, 2007 Report Share Posted August 8, 2007 Noooo! Hope they're both ok. More soon please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted August 10, 2007 Report Share Posted August 10, 2007 From now on the chapters are going to be short, becuase I just cant seem to make my self write long chapters Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 She abandoned it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted August 12, 2007 Report Share Posted August 12, 2007 Write more soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted September 3, 2007 Report Share Posted September 3, 2007 hope this continues cause its really gud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dee83 Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 great so far can`t wait for more update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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