beckyboo Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Type of story: Short/Long fic Rating: Main Characters: Martha and Jack and everyone else Genre: A mixture Warnings: Is Story being proof read: Yes Summary: Martha and Jack stuggle for a baby! Hey all i am writting a new fic about Jack and Martha and another charater who will not be named yet!!!!!!! Just a few pointers *Ash and Sam never happened *Jack did get beat up and this made Martha love him more *Martha has had 5 miscarriages in the last 4 years *Martha can’t get pregnant *Jacks 28 and Martha’s 23 *Martha and Jack had been married for four years and Martha had had four miscarriages and no more then ever the one thing that would complete this family is a baby. Chapter one coming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Woo first comment! Poor Martha. This sounds really interesting. I wonder what's going to happen and who is the mystery person? Can't wait for the first chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martha_Jack Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 This sounds good, but 5 miscarriages the would be bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Chapter One Martha and Jack were on the beach just wrapped up in each others arms People passing by would think they were a young married couple well they didt no how wrong they would be as Martha has just had her fifth miscarriage in four years and the doctors had just delivered the terrible news that Martha would never be able to have children. “Jack im giving you the option to leave me and to go with someone who can give you children because I can” she sobbed to him “Shhhhh im not going anywhere” he assured her Later on that day Martha and jack had just told their families the news they were as equally upset as Martha and jack but Martha was heartbroken not upset. Flashback 5 years earlier Martha and Jack were laying in bed together when Jack made Martha close her eyes and he then took out a ring box and asked Martha to marry him of course she didt hesitate in saying yes. Martha and jack just lay there in their bed together on a high when jack asked Martha if she ever wanted kids and Martha told jack that she did they agreed to start trying after the wedding which they were planning 4 months from that day. That was the happiest day of Martha’s life. Back to reality “Jack what are we going to do” she asked him quietly weeping in his arms on their bed. “I don’t know, we don’t need to decide anything yet babe” he soothed her “But I want a baby and we can’t have one” she sobbed uncontrolably this time This broke Jacks heart and all he could do was hold her at this difficult time in their life. Next day Jack knew Martha needed to talk to someone but not him someone else she could open up too. “Hello Nat, hey it’s Jack” he said down the phone to Martha’s friend. “Hello Becky, Its me you need to come quick Martha’s had another miscarriage” he says sadly on the phone to Becky Martha’s younger sister. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martha_Jack Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Poor Martha, I feel sorry for her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caitrules Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Awww, poor Martha, thats so sad. Great start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 yay becky is starting another fic *dances in circles* O god lol im so weird lol well that was great poor martha and not being able to have kiddies that would be horrible well this is great and you need to update ASAP xoxox <3 Tiff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Awww Great start, but very sad. Hmmm this their person has got me thinking *scratches head* More soon please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Poor things. 5 miscarriages would be extremely sad and then finding out you can't have kids Great start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 yay a chapter. Poor Martha Great start More please ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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