xsianx Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Aww brilliant/tragic start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 great start i love your fics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 i agree with zetti your fics are great!! poor martha and jack 5 miscarrages (sp) i couldn't even to begin to think what they're going through update soon..x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 I love your fics as well and it was a great start but awwww... this is the sadness. But it's still really good though, please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Natasha~ Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Aww it's really good, Bec! Poor Martha and Jack though. Hope you post more soon xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Great chapter Bec. Poor Martha and Jack. Update soon, lets hope they get the oppurtunity of having their own baby! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Laura- Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Aww poor Martha and Jack! Great start though and intrigued to see where this goes and what she does from the story title so update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Thanks to Sian for being my proof reader for this I forgots to mention that at the begining This is for Tasha as she has been bugging me to post!!!!! Chapter two Becky and Natalie had just arrived at the same time and were now talking to Jack Natalie decided that Becky should go in to see Martha first as she was her sister. “Knock knock knock someone’s at the door” Becky sang Martha instantly knew who it was a small smile came out on to her face as Becky came in and sat on the bed. “Let me guess Jack called you” Martha said “Well hello to you too” Becky said sarcastically “Hey” Martha laughed Becky and Martha where on the bed just talking when Natalie came in to see them “Nat hey” Martha said “Hello Hun” Natalie said Natalie ended up leaving Martha and Becky talking “Well I guess you know what’s happened to me, I can never have children” Martha said as she felt the tears build up in her eyes. Becky just wrapped her in a tight embrace and soothed her as the tears that threatened to fall, fell. “I feel like a complete failure of a wife” she sobbed “What? why? don’t ever feel like that, Jack loves you with or without a baby” she reassured her. Becky had gone home but she told Jack she would call later on to make sure she was ok. Later on that evening “Martha you ok?” Jack asked her with sympathy in his voice. He knew she was hurting and so was he, every time they got their hopes up they were cruelly taken from them and he saw the sad look in his wife’s eyes every time, when they were informed. As her husband all he wanted to do is just make the pain go away and make her smile her beautiful smile again. She came and sat on the sofa next to him, leaning her head on his shoulder, she started to shiver as the sad emotion came over her but she didn't fight it she cried into his shoulder and Jack tried to comfort her as much as possible. “You would think that after five I would be an expert at not crying but it hurts just as much as the last one” she cried “and to top it all off I have to for a D&C and I really don’t want them too” she cried. “Ano you don’t babe but they have to” he said “I don’t want them to take it out, maybe if they leave it, it will be ok” she cried “Martha it’s dead you no that” Jack was now silently crying too Four weeks later and Martha was going back to her old self. Martha and Jack were walking down the beach “Jack I’ve been thinking” she said “About…” Jack prompted her “Adoption” she said happily “Adoption what why and what?” he asked confused “I’ve been thinking off it for a while now, well the idea came to me when I was having my 5th D&C I’m never going to be able to give birth I cant carry a baby for more than 3 months so adoption is the next best thing” she sighed “Well if you’re sure” he asked her “I am Jack really I am” she told him “Well ok then we can look in to it” he said smiling at her A D&C :an evacuation D&C is performed in a recently pregnant woman in order to remove tissue remaining in the womb (after misscarrieges) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted January 30, 2007 Report Share Posted January 30, 2007 Brilliant! Well done Bec. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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