caitlin87 Posted March 6, 2006 Report Share Posted March 6, 2006 Really enjoyed your latest chapters Jess. Well Done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted March 7, 2006 Report Share Posted March 7, 2006 Fabulous. No story's real without **** ups and your description of this one seems very much like something that would happen. An excellent, well written chapter, this story's taking me in...more soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Tess- Posted March 7, 2006 Report Share Posted March 7, 2006 Fantastic as always, Jess! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted March 9, 2006 Report Share Posted March 9, 2006 terrific !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassie turner Posted March 10, 2006 Report Share Posted March 10, 2006 Great! I loved the story line but i didnt read the lyrics as it broke up the story abit. Still loved what you wrote and cant wait to see what happens with henry! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rachrules Posted March 11, 2006 Report Share Posted March 11, 2006 I really really loovveed it!!!! i just soo want maddie & luke back together!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted March 12, 2006 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2006 Really great Jess! Very dramatic and emotional. Using all of the different points of view worked really well in this last chapter. The whole morning after thing really reminded me of the new Veronica's song, "When it all falls apart", have you heard it? I there's a bit in it going, "And did I mention, I drank too much, I'm so hung over, Out of touch..." I'm trying to find a full version of the lyrics somewhere, but I can't find it at the moment. Anyway, the story is really going great. I'm a bit upset that Luke and Mattie broke up but your description of all of the scenes is very good. Hope you update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Tess- Posted March 13, 2006 Report Share Posted March 13, 2006 Great as usual, Jess! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted March 17, 2006 Report Share Posted March 17, 2006 Quality. Not much else to say. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted March 18, 2006 Report Share Posted March 18, 2006 Terrific !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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