da_love_goddess Posted May 1, 2006 Report Share Posted May 1, 2006 Great chapter Nicole. I really liked the Lucas bit, it was so funny. Poor Martha .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted May 1, 2006 Report Share Posted May 1, 2006 Just thought I'd warn y'all that from the next chapter there will be references to Undercover Cop 1. So sorry to confuse people who haven't read it! =) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ciaobella Posted May 1, 2006 Report Share Posted May 1, 2006 great im luvin it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 1, 2006 Report Share Posted May 1, 2006 Hey!! Absolutely fantastic chapters!! great writing! Loved Lucas impersonating Martha, that was hilarious i could just imagine Luc doing that sort of thing thought lol. Please update again soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted May 1, 2006 Report Share Posted May 1, 2006 Just caught up with this. well done it's still great. Love the way you keep putting twists and turns in. I'm amazed you've kept me interested in a Jack and Martha fic for this long...they're not my favourite characters but you have so thats a pretty big achievement. well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da_love_goddess Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 Great chapter Nicole. I liked the way they alked about what happened with Dave and Jenny and what happened after Martha left Summer Bay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 Aww that was cute. Liked all the mentions of Jenny and Dave etc. I hope Jack can forgive Martha. Hope for another update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 (edited) Nicole I know I have said it before but I will say it again, this fic is awesome and I can't believe it's ending. *tear rolls down cheek* You really are a talented little writer aren't you?lol. Seeing as they're on the cliff where they shared there first kiss maybe they could end it there aswell and start afresh? Please!!!! Well however it's written they better have a happy ending or else! lol That army of little people will turn on you! lol. Please update soon I really can't wait. Edited May 2, 2006 by jacknmarthaluver Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 Great update. I can't believe I'm actually enjoying reading about Jack and Martha, they usually do my head in but I've really enjoyed this. Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 Brilliant. Atleast their both getting along well now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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