Drew Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 That was good update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lalee47 Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 Chapter 5: Why FRIDAY In 5 hours, Macca, Amanda and Ryan will leave for L.A. Without Belle. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It is now 6:00pm and the search continues. Poloce have already investigated the shed that Lucas described when he was released. "Help us! Help us! Please someone help!" A voice is heard through the deep grasses. Rescue teams come running to find TWO released hostages! "What are your names?" Asks one of the rescuers. "I'm Dylan O'Rourke and this is Cassie Turner." "Whats wrong with her?" Asks another rescuer. "I don't know. She collapsed a few kilometres back. That psycho Eve or Zoe or whatever only gave us water every now and then. She wanted us to suffer." Dylan replies. Cassie is immidiately rushed to hospital. She is unconscious but stable. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Belle has moved all her stuff into Irene's place. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Beth goes home for a break even though she doesnt want too. Alf told her to take a break and he will call her as soon as anything happens. "Whats happened. Have they found Mattie?" Asks Scott. "No. But they found Cassie and Dylan." Beth says sadly. "Where are the kids?" Beth asks, changing the subject "Oh, in bed." Hayley replies. "Matilda, she must be going through hell. That psycho nut-faced cracker Zoe must be-- Suddenly Scott has a panic attack and is taken to hospital. Hayley is very worried, extremely worried! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- THE SEARCH Dan and Leah are looking when Dan's mobile rings. "Dan Baker speaking." "What? Your kidding me." "You can't do that." "It's crazy." "You know what. Fine. I'll bring it up in court." And with that, Dan hangs up. "Who was that?" Asks Leah. "Amanda. She's taking Ryan and Macca to L.A" Dan says sternly. "She can't do that. What about Belle?" "Belle didn't want to go. So Amanada just abandoned her. Typical Amanda." "Where will she stay?" "At Irenes. My main concern is getting Ryan back!" Dan replies madly. "Leah, i'm scared. I may just lose Ryan and Drew, what will I do?" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Next episode -Who dies? -Whats wrong with Cassie? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Thanks for reading this guys. I enjoyed writing this chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 Those 2 chapters were great. Hope you update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted October 7, 2006 Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 Oooo...does Mattie die?? That would be horrible, or maybe Scott dies Great chapter Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lalee47 Posted October 8, 2006 Report Share Posted October 8, 2006 I will try and update tomorrow. I have been really busy with school holidays and sports and stuff. Hope you are all enjoying Sisters turn on computer gotta go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted October 9, 2006 Report Share Posted October 9, 2006 I liiiiiiiiiiiike it! No, I love it! Really good writing. Hmmmm, this is getting interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted October 15, 2006 Report Share Posted October 15, 2006 Please update-soon, preferably, now, but mI doubt that will happen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krystal93 Posted October 19, 2006 Report Share Posted October 19, 2006 that is good pl,z update and plz give sum jack and martha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stuart2006 Posted October 19, 2006 Report Share Posted October 19, 2006 Can you please update it is a fab story? Please...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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