da_love_goddess Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 Great work jackandmartha. I really liked the last few chapters. I hope Martha realises she still loves Jack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ciaobella Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 oh no!!! luv this story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~emma~ Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Come on Martha... you know you want to kiss him!!! Great story. Keep up the good work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Love it please post more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_jessik Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 i hope everyone is liking this fic *she aks hopefully* lol but if it's getting a bit boring or repetitive or there is anything i can improve then please tell me cos I don't want to bore the people who are reading it! thanks Well you asked for it so here is my opinion: “Jack, just give up now. There is never going to be another ‘us’. We’ve had our chances and it just wasn’t meant to be.” There needs to be another 'us'. Otherwise we will be all sad . So please make it so there is 'us' and then everyone will love it. hahaa jokes. Your story is great. I love it. And I read every single Jack & Martha fic & never get bored. Just sometimes abit sad/happy/mad lol And you don't need to change your story. Just write how you want, and if people don't like it well in my opinion that's there problem because this story is amazing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 Im loving this story!! I hope Martha and Jack get back together though lol. Please update again soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sal_gurl Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 i love please update soon and i hope Martha and Jack get back together soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 I think that Martha needs to find out that the weirdo girl set Jack up. And sooner, rather than later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotchoc Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 Great chapter!! you don't need to change anything at all cuz it's amazing an i love the tension between them. arghh i just hate martha sometimes so damn stubborn,lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted May 4, 2006 Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 thanks to everyone for their comments! i would be nice and tell you whether they get back together or not in the end but i wanna keep you all guessing! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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