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Hey all. This is the first time I’ve did this so bear with me if it’s a bit stupid (Is that even the right way to spell bear for that type of meaning? :lol: Lol, ah well). So yeah, this is my first fan-fic and I think it’s super great! It’s not just based around one story like most fan-fics, it’s based around the whole bay at this present time, though six months into the future that continue off the present storylines in Australia, so for the UK people, maybe some of these storylines will contain spoilers for you. So just beware! The fan-fic picks up six months into the future from this weeks storylines. Below is just a quick re-cap from now into the six months so you get where the story is at… I'm aiming at about two episodes per weeks. Depends if you people like it or not :P I'll post the first episode sometime between tomorow and Friday...

Six Months On…

After the murder of Josh West the hunt for the killer continued for several months, with most of the Bay being a suspect the hunt for the murderer wasn’t easy. On the 15th of July, the killer was found and was a surprise to all when the killer was unmasked and was none other then Morag Bellingham. After several weeks in court Morag was found guilty and was sentenced to twelve years in prison. During Josh’s hunt Alf was freed from jail when evidence rose from the surface, that set him free.

Amanda fled town when most of the bay thought she was a suspect. Arriving back in the bay two months after the Mayor’s death, Amanda was driven back into the arms of her ex husband, Dan Baker. Amanda and Dan kept their relationship secret until people began to learn the truth, Amanda and Dan were together again. Much to Leah’s heartbreak, she left to go live with her parents in the city. Dan moved into Amanda’s apartment and the family of three was beginning to be reformed. Leah left her house in Rachel’s name and Kim moved in to be with his much older love. The blackmail and torture of Dr. Helpmen has still continued six months on, it’s at the point now where Rachel will do anything to keep her toy-boy and her career… Anything.

After the discovery of her pregnancy, Tasha and Robbie have finally accepted what’s happened and are moving forward with their life, with Tasha keeping the baby. Robbie has promised Tash that even though it’s Jonah’s baby, he will still love the kid as if it was his own. Throughout the pregnancy, Robbie has been trying to sneak his way into prison to confront Jonah, but things keep getting in his way.

The hunt for Mama Rose is still on and she is still on the run. And the secret that Peter has been hiding from the bay has just been exposed to Jack Holden, that the Summer Bay stalker is still alive and out there!

Though this may seem like a calm six months since the shooting of Josh West, though everything you thought you knew of the residents will crumble when you learn the shocking secrets of some, others return to the Bay for a “Happy Ending”. Others will be murdered, some will find the truth about who they really are, some couples say “I Do” but will they make it to the end without someone objecting? And two villains will return for the ultimate revenge. Yes, in true Home and Away style, this is my story. Sex, Scandal, Secrets, Lies, Betrayal, Murder, Romance, Tragedy and Revenge… Welcome to Bay Crush! (Sounds a bit like Baycast, but meh)

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Okay guys here's the first episode, like i said i'm not use to this so sorry if it sounds a bit bland :lol:

PREVIOUSLY… IN SUMMER BAY

BEACH HOUSE/LIVING AREA

TASHA

How do i say this? I’m pregnant. [Robbie and Irene look shock]

ROBBIE

How can he do this? Those people make me sick!

TASHA

Robbie calm down.

ROBBIE

I knew those people were bad!

BEACH HOUSE/TASHA’S ROOM

TASHA

I’m going to keep the baby.

ROBBIE

Whatever you choose I’ll support. [Robbie and Tasha kiss]

AMANDA’S APARTMENT

[Dan and Amanda kiss]

AMANDA

So this is it? You’re giving us a second chance?

DAN

I know what happened in the past is hard to put behind, but looking at the bigger picture Amanda, I never stopped loving you. [They kiss]

THE DINER/MAIN AREA

[Dan and Amanda walk in, Colleen notices that they’re together]

COLLEEN

What brings you here young Daniel?

AMANDA

Hi Colleen. [Colleen gives her a death stare, Amanda smiles and holds Dan’s hand, she notices what’s going on]

COLLEEN

Oh dear!

THE DINER/KITCHEN

COLLEEN

Oh I thought it will never happen, and there it was before my eyes!

LEAH

Colleen what are you on about?

COLLEEN

Young Daniel got back together with that WITCH! [Leah looks surprised and upset]

PATTERSON HOUSE/LOUNGEROOM

LEAH

I can’t deal with this Sally I just can’t.

SALLY

What are you going to do?

LEAH

I’m going to leave the Bay.

BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA

[barry and Irene are talking on the bench]

IRENE

I found out the reason why Belle moved to town, she’s here to find her mother.

BARRY

Her mother lives here?

IRENE

Yeah, but she has no clue where to start.

BARRY

What about a DNA sample, to help her find her mother?

BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA

[irene and Belle hug]

IRENE

Oh, look at that, a grey hair.

BELLE

Where? [irene pulls out a hair]

IRENE

Don’t worry it’s gone. [They both smile]

HUNTER HOUSE/MAIN AREA

[beth, Tony, Robbie and Tasha are eating dinner, Tasha is around seven months pregnant, she gets a pain]

ROBBIE

Is everything alright?

TASHA

Um no, my water just broke. [Everyone looks at each other]

EPISODE ONE:

LET YOUR TRUE IDENTITY BE UNMASKED

THE ROAD/ROBBIE’S CAR

[Tasha looks like she’s in pain]

TASHA

This is so soon, I can’t have the baby yet, it’s too soon.

ROBBIE

It will be alright.

TASHA

I’m going into premature labor, I don’t think our baby will be alright.

ROBBIE

Your baby.

TASHA

What’s that supposed to mean? [Robbie doesn’t answer] Is this about Jonah?

ROBBIE

Tash, I’m trying to concentrate on my driving. [Tash gets a contraction] Just breathe, everything should be okay.

TASHA

I love you no matter what happens. [Robbie looks at her then looks back at the road] Please don’t tell me you’re having second thoughts about this.

ROBBIE

No, I’m not. I love you too.

HUNTER HOUSE/MAIN AREA & BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA

BETH

Don’t you think she’s too early for her water to break? Surely it’s just false pains?

TONY

She’s been under a lot of stress, to be honest I’m not surprised this didn’t happen earlier.

BETH

Stress about what, the believers?

TONY

She’s brining a raped child into the world, can you imagine how she’ll feel? How Robbie will feel? [Tony walks away, Beth has a look on her face that she’s hiding something]

BETH

I’m going to ring Irene, and tell her what’s going on.

TONY

I’m going to have a quick shower, then we’ll go to the hospital?

BETH

Yep, sure. [Tony walks away and Irene picks up the phone]

IRENE

Hello?

BETH

Irene it’s Beth how are you?

IRENE

I’m good love, how are you? [irene stares at Belle whose listening to her ipod]

BETH

I’m well. Has Robbie called you?

IRENE

No, should he have?

BETH

Tasha’s gone into labor.

IRENE

What!?

BETH

I know, it came to a shock to us as well.

IRENE

But she’s only seven and a half months pregnant!

BETH

Tony thinks it’s because of the stress.

IRENE

Well if that’s the cause I don’t blame the kid, being drugged into something she didn’t want to be apart of. Those lunatics deserve to be locked up!

BETH

Most of them are.

IRENE

I’m talking about the ringleader of all this commotion. When they find her they should lock her up and throw away the key!

PETER’S APPARTMENT/LOUNGEROOM

[Amanda and Peter are talking]

PETER

Thanks for bringing this over.

AMANDA

It’s alright, if you need anything else…

PETER

Of course I know where to find you, you live two doors down from me. [They laugh] I miss this.

AMANDA

Miss what? [Peter kisses her] Peter!

PETER

What?

AMANDA

I’m with Dan now, I can’t run off having another affair behind his back, it will kill him.

PETER

You rather stay away from me, to keep my brother happy? [Amanda stares at him] Don’t you miss all the fun we had all those years ago?

AMANDA

So we slept together a few times, Pete, time has changed. [Pete looks at her]

PETER

And you haven’t… You know you want to be with me.

AMANDA

I don’t. That was eight, nine years ago. This is now, I’m with Dan.

PETER

Well then why don’t we let history repeat itself? [Peter kisses Amanda, though Amanda doesn’t pull away]

THE HOSPITAL/EMERGENCY

[Robbie and Tasha walk in]

ROBBIE

We need help here! [Julie walks up to them]

JULIE

What’s wrong with her? Are you alright?

TASHA

My water broke.

JULIE

Oh! I’ll go get a wheelchair, and get a doctor for you. [Julie walks away]

TASHA

Robbie, please tell me this is going to all be okay. [Robbie hugs her]

ROBBIE

It will all be okay. [Robbie has a sad look on his face]

PETER’S APPARTMENT/LOUNGEROOM

[Peter and Amanda are all over each other making out]

AMANDA

You know Dan’s going to kill you when he finds out.

PETER

How? [They keep kissing]

AMANDA

Oh I’ve missed this. [Amanda pushes Peter onto the lounge, lies on top of him an unbuttons his shirt]

PETER

I’ve missed this too. [Amanda takes his shirt off and they keep pashing]

THE HOSPITAL/EMERGENCY

[Julie comes with a wheelchair]

JULIE

Tasha sit down, everything is being organized, a doctor will be here very soon. Robbie do you mind staying out here just for five minutes?

ROBBIE

Sure. [Julie wheels Tasha away, Beth, Tony and Irene walk in]

IRENE

Oh god save us! Where is she?

ROBBIE

Julie took her into a room.

IRENE

Well shouldn’t you flippn be with her? [Robbie says nothing]

BETH

Oh Robbie. [beth hugs him] It will be okay.

ROBBIE

How can they do this?

TONY

It will be alright mate.

THE HOSPITAL/A ROOM

JULIE

When did these contractions start?

TASHA

About an hour ago.

JULIE

And they’re about five minutes apart… You’re going to have a pretty quick birth Tasha. [Tasha gets a pain] Just breathe sweetie, just breathe.

TASHA

It hurts, where’s Robbie, can he come in now?

JULIE

I’ll go get him. [Julie walks out] Robbie, you can come in now.

ROBBIE

I’ll be alright thanks.

JULIE

Robbie, she’s going to need you.

BETH

Go in sweetie, show her your support. [Robbie walks in, Tasha is breathing heavily]

TASHA

Hey.

ROBBIE

Hey, how are you?

TASHA

I’m about to have a baby Robbie, what do you think? [she smiles, Robbie begins to look upset, he walks back out] Robbie, Robbie!

PETER’S APPARTMENT/LOUNGEROOM/BEDROOM

PETER

Let’s go into the bedroom?

AMANDA

And do what? [They kiss]

PETER

Do I have to say the obvious? [Peter picks her up, both are half naked]

AMANDA

Oh Peter, you bad boy. [They kiss, he lays her on the bed, he lies on top of her they make out] I should call Dan.

PETER

Why?

AMANDA

So he knows where I am.

PETER

Dan went to the movies with Ryan, I think he’ll be okay. [They continue to make out]

THE HOSPITAL/EMERGENCY

[belle walks in, Irene, Tony and Beth are sitting on the seats]

IRENE

Oh honey, you didn’t have to come. How did you get here by the way?

BELLE

I walked.

IRENE

Alright then.

BELLE

It’s been three hours, hasn’t she had the baby yet? [They all look at her] Can I go in and see her?

IRENE

Be my guest, that room just there. [irene points to a room, Belle walks in there]

THE HOSPITAL/A ROOM

BELLE

Knock, knock. [belle smiles]

TASHA

Belle, hey.

BELLE

I thought I’ll see how my sole sister is doing?

TASHA

These contractions are killing me.

BELLE

It will be worth it.

TASHA

I guess… Have you seen Robbie?

BELLE

No, doesn’t he know?

TASHA

Yeah, he’s just trying to ignore the whole situation.

BELLE

Why? Oh? I thought he was okay about all this stuff with Jonah.

TASHA

So did i. [she gets a major contraction she can barely breathe]

BELLE

Tasha, are you okay? [Tasha can’t talk] Help, someone! [irene, Beth, Tony and Julie walk in] I think she’s having the baby.

TASHA

I can’t breathe!

JULIE

Okay, we’re going to have to take you into theater, where’s Robbie?

THE HOSPITAL/OUTSIDE

[Robbie is sitting on a seat, he looks very upset]

ABANDON WAREHOUSE/MAIN AREA

[A woman inside is chanting, she’s in the middle of five candles and around the candles are rose petals]

WOMAN

-The roses represent nature… Desire… Fertility… The answer to our ways. The candles represent the light of our future. Blessed be my child, I welcome thee into this world! [The camera moves towards the face, the face looks upwards and it’s Mumma Rose, a mysterious dark figure walks up behind her, which is a young girl]

YOUNG GIRL

We’ve only been reunited, not even twenty four hours, and you’re already going back to your old ways.

MUMMA ROSE

I never gave up my beliefs dear child.

YOUNG GIRL

I notice five candles and a rose circle…

MUMMA ROSE

My child, our chosen one will be giving life to our future leader… Any second now. [Mumma Rose smiles]

THE HOSPITAL/THEARTRE

DOCTOR

Push.

TASHA

I can’t.

DOCTOR

Yes you can, big push, big! [Tasha pushes]

TASHA

I can’t, it’s too hard. I need Robbie, where’s Robbie?

IRENE

Belle’s trying to find him love. Oh, I see a head!

DOCTOR

Come on Tasha, you can do this. On the count of three. One!

TASHA

I can’t!

DOCTOR

Two. [Tasha pushes] Three! [Tasha screams and makes a big push, a baby is crying]

TASHA

Oh, oh thank god.

DOCTOR

He’s a boy! [irene smiles]

IRENE

Oh look at him! [The doctor hands Irene scissors to cut the cord, she cuts it] Hello cute one! Does mummy want a hold? [Tasha smiles and Irene hands her the baby, Tasha smiles and Robbie is staring from outside]

ABANDON WAREHOUSE/MAIN AREA

MUMMA ROSE

It is done!

PETER’S APARTMENT/BEDROOM

[Peter is asleep, Amanda is lying on top of him, she smiles]

THE HOSPITAL/WAITING AREA

[irene walks out]

IRENE

It’s a boy!

BETH

Oh, how wonderful! [They hug]

TONY

How’s Tasha doing?

IRENE

She’s doing fine. [Rachel walks up to them]

RACHEL

Julie just told me the news, congratulations.

IRENE

Thanks. How are you love?

RACHEL

I’m good, though can I see you for a second?

IRENE

Um sure. Be right back guys.

BETH

Bye.

THE HOSPITAL/RACHEL’S OFFICE

[Rachel opens the door, they walk inside and talk near the doorframe]

RACHEL

The results have come back from the lab.

IRENE

Oh good, hopefully a piece of the puzzle. [Rachel hands her the results, with a disappointing look] Are you okay?

RACHEL

Irene, it’s not what we were hoping for.

IRENE

What do you mean? You found her mum didn’t you? She’s dead isn’t she?

RACHEL

No, she’s very much alive and still is living in the Bay. [irene opens it, her smile turns into disappointment]

IRENE

What does this mean Amanda! Not Amanda Vale!?

RACHEL

I didn’t believe it at first either, that’s why I got the lab too run the tests twice, but both have came back with the same result… Amanda is Belle’s mother! [belle walks past]

BELLE

Oh there you are Irene, I was looking for you.

IRENE

Oh my god.

BELLE

Irene?

IRENE

Oh my god.

PETER’S APARTMENT/BEDROOM

[Amanda is asleep on top of Peter, both are asleep]

ABANDON WAREHOUSE/MAIN AREA

YOUNG GIRL

So what is it, a boy or a girl?

MUMMA ROSE

Oh, I don’t have that sense of gifts. You can proudly say now that you’re an auntie.

YOUNG GIRL

Where does this girl live? Far from here?

MUMMA ROSE

Summer Bay.

YOUNG GIRL

Summer Bay!? Are you serious?

MUMMA ROSE

Heard of the place before have you?

YOUNG GIRL

You never read the papers did you? [The girl bends down and whispers in her ear, the shadow disappears and the figure is revealed, it’s Zoe] I was the Summer Bay stalker! [Mumma Rose turns too look at Zoe, they both smile]

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