aejdude Posted March 27, 2006 Report Posted March 27, 2006 Episode three should be up by tomorow or the next day. Stay tunned, the show get's really spicey at the end of the episode What will happen? No body knows Ok, i'm looking forward to it.
sevenpuddings Posted March 27, 2006 Report Posted March 27, 2006 Can't wait for episode three. It's all so great. Like I'm watching an actual episode of Home & Away.
Drew Posted March 28, 2006 Report Posted March 28, 2006 PREVIOUSLY… IN SUMMER BAY COURT HOUSE/MAIN AREA [Morag is standing up besides her lawyer, Ric, Alf, Martha, Sally and Irene are sitting in the crowd] JUDGE Morag Bellingham, after pleying guilty to the murder of Joshua West, I hear by find you guilty of murdering the town mayor, your punishment shall be ten to twenty years in jail. [Everyone gets up, they start shouting at the judge] ALF You’re kidding me! RIC You can’t do this she’s innocent! [Morag turns around] MORAG It will be alright, I know what I’m doing. SUMMER BAY HOUSE/MAIN AREA [Alf, Sally, Ric, Cassie, Martha and Irene are sitting at the table] ALF There’s no way she pulled the trigger on that piece of scum. MARTHA The way she acted was funny though, as if she knew what was going to happen. RIC She’s a lawyer, she sees this stuff everyday, of course she’s going to know what happened. ALF No, it was something else, she had a grin on her face, she was too cocky, that sister of mine is up to something, we better find out what it is before she stays there for the rest of her life! JAIL/VISITING ROOM [Morag is sitting down on her side of the table, she’s talking to someone, but we can’t see the figure] MORAG This better be worth it, I hope you know what you’re doing, otherwise I’ll make sure the whole town knows who really killed Josh West! THE HOSPITAL/RACHEL’S OFFICE RACHEL I didn’t believe it at first either, that’s why I got the lab too run the tests twice, but both have came back with the same result… Amanda is Belle’s mother! AMANDA’S APARTMENT/MAIN AREA BELLE Did you have a baby on the 12th of January, 1989? AMANDA What!? [belle hands her the results] What is this? [Amanda reads the letter] BELLE Are you my mother? AMANDA What is this rubbish? BELLE Did you, or didn’t you have a baby on the 12th of January 1989? [Amanda looks shocked] AMANDA Oh my god, get out of here. What do you want my money? [Amanda pushes Belle towards the door, Dan quickly pretends he’s doing something] BELLE I don’t want your money, I just want to know if you had a baby on that date!? THE BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA [belle walks in crying, Irene is pacing around the room] IRENE Oh there you are girly, I was getting worried! [They hug] BELLE I hate her so much. IRENE Join the club. THE HOSPITAL/DR. HELPMAN’S OFFICE RACHEL You think you’re above everyone else, but you’re not. I don’t care about your bully games anymore, they’re over. Kim and I will be together, and nothing will stand in my way… Nothing. [Helpman gets up] DR. HELPMAN Oh, my heart is breaking Rachel. Is that all you’ve got? A stupid little speech to scare me off, you have another thing coming. [Helpman walks out, Rachel stays in the room, she has a flash back of her finding the details about Helpman’s strokes] RACHEL Ah the heart… His one true weakness… [Rachel has a smile, looks around the room and walks out, she closes the door behind her] EPISODE THREE: IT’S BEEN NICE KNOWING YOU SUMMER BAY HOUSE/MAIN AREA [sally walks out from the foyer and into the main area with a basket full of clothes, she finds flowers on the bench, she puts the basket on the bench, picks up the flowers and smells them] SALLY Oh, how beautiful! [she tries to find a card, she finds one that says “SALLY”, Ric walks in] Hey. RIC Hey. SALLY Are these from you? [Ric looks at her] RIC The flowers? Nah. SALLY They’re so beautiful, they most of cost a fortune. Do you have any washing you need done? RIC My clothes are waiting for you already in the laundry. [Ric smiles, Sally gets out a vase to put the flowers in] SALLY Really? What about Cassie’s clothes? [she puts water in the vase] RIC I don’t know. So you don’t know who sent you the flowers? SALLY No, I just found them here just then. RIC Somebody has a secret admirer. [Ric laughs] SALLY Well it must have been one of the customers for using the vans or something. [she walks into the laundry] RIC I’m going to head over to Belle’s if that’s okay? SALLY Sure, will you be home in time for dinner? RIC I should, if not I’ll give you a call. Bye. SALLY See ya. [Ric walks out] JAIL/VISITING ROOM [Morag is sitting at the table looking a bit worried, someone comes up to her table] MORAG Ah, I was wondering when you were going to visit me next. [The camera moves upwards, revealing that it’s Josie] JOSIE Hello Morag. Sorry it’s been awhile since my last visit but I’ve been trying to find every way I can to get you out of here. MORAG Good news I hope. JOSIE Very. Let’s just hope that it all goes to plan. MORAG Who would of thought it? Me working with you. JOSIE The thought still scars my mind, but remember, we’re doing this to protect our loved ones. MORAG Ah yes, our loved ones. How is Tasha? JOSIE Robbie called me the other night, she had the baby. MORAG Really? If it wasn’t for this baby, none of this would be happening. [she has a cocky smile] JOSIE I told you Morag, I have a way to get you out of here. [Josie smiles, then Morag] PATTERSON HOUSE/KITCHEN [Rachel is making herself lunch, Kim walks in] KIM Hello. [He kisses her from behind] RACHEL Hey you. [she turns around and they pash] KIM Thought I’ll drop by during my break. Shouldn’t you be at work? RACHEL I’m on my break too. [Rachel turns back around and continues making her lunch] KIM Are you okay? RACHEL Yeah fine, why wouldn’t I be? KIM It’s just ever since yesterday when you came back from work, you seemed quiet and not yourself. RACHEL Just a bad day, sorry if you thought I was avoiding you. KIM Nah, I don’t think that at all. Was it Doctor Helpman? RACHEL Yes. But we shouldn’t matter, this whole problem will disappear real soon. [Rachel smiles as she cuts her bread] KIM What do you mean? RACHEL I mean, I found a way to keep us together without no more blackmail and bullying games. [Rachel goes and sits on the table] KIM Are you going to tell me what this plan is? [Kim laughs] RACHEL Drug him. KIM Excuse me? RACHEL I looked through his medical file yesterday and found out he had two serious heart attacks within the last year, there are some drugs that we use in the hospital that can affect your heart, it could seriously harm you though if you have a weak heart… [Rachel smiles at Kim, Kim says nothing] A weak heart will mean he’ll be out of our way forever, once he’s dead. [Kim looks shocked] KIM You’re going to murder Doctor Helpman? Rachel do you know how crazy you sound. RACHEL Kim, murder is such a bad way of looking at it. If he’s gone, we could be together forever without having to watch our backs everyday. I like to look at it as a new chapter in our life. KIM This isn’t right. We shouldn’t do this. RACHEL After all that he’s done, after everything he’s tried to ruin my career and our happiness? The jerk deserves to get a piece of his own medicine… What goes around, comes around. [Rachel smiles, Kim begins to look relaxed in the situation] JAIL/VISITING ROOM [Morag and Josie are still talking] MORAG Have you moved back into town yet? JOSIE No, I was waiting for Tasha to have the baby, now that she’s had it I decided to move back to the bay and put my full focus on helping Tash and the baby and helping you getting out of this hell hole. MORAG And when will that be? JOSIE Soon. When you get out of here I’ll make it up to you so much Morag. I can’t thank you how much this means to me, you putting yourself in my position. MORAG What’s done has been done Josie. JOSIE I know, but no need to worry. Josh is gone, and it’s all because me. [Josie smiles] THE BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA [Ric and Belle are sitting on lounge] RIC Are you okay? BELLE Yeah, why wouldn’t I be? RIC You’ve hardly said a word since I arrived here. [He kisses her] Something is wrong, tell me. BELLE If I tell you, promise not to tell anyone? RIC Belle, I’m your boyfriend, of course you could trust me. BELLE Okay, that’s good. [she smiles] I found out yesterday who my mother was. RIC You’re joking! Who is it? BELLE Amanda. RIC Amanda!? Amanda Vale!? BELLE Yep, this whole time it’s been her all along, and I never knew. RIC Oh my god! SUMMER BAY HOUSE/MAIN AREA [sally walks in the back door with an empty washing basket, she finds a rose on the bench with a note attached to it, Sally smiles] SALLY How cute. [she opens the note, her smile turns into shock, Sally looks confused, she drops the note on the bench and looks around the house, the note says “IT’S BEEN NICE KNOWING YOU… AND I CAN’T WAIT TO BE WITH YOU ONCE AGAIN” THE HOSPITAL/DR. HELPMAN’S OFFICE [Rachel walks in, Dr. Helpman is sitting at his desk] RACHEL You wanted to see me Dr.? DR. HELPMAN Yes, I did. Where were you an hour ago? RACHEL I was at home on my lunch break, why? DR. HELPMAN There was an emergency here before and there were only two doctors here to take over the drama. RACHEL That’s not my fault sir, I wasn’t even here. DR. HELPMAN But you should have been! [Rachel has a dirty look on her face] Never go home again during your break, now go get me a coffee. RACHEL Excuse me? DR. HELPMAN I said go get me a- RACHEL No, I heard you the first time! I’m not going around getting coffee for you like I’m your personal nanny! If you want a nanny go call Fran, I’m sure she could help you out. DR. HELPMAN Oh look, we have a comedian in the hospital. If you wanted to be a clown Rachel I think you should be working in the children’s hospital. [Rachel smiles] RACHEL You know what, I’ll go get the coffee. [she smiles and walks away, she walks up the coffee machine, makes a coffee, she then puts a drug in there, puts the lid on it and smiles] JULIE Rachel, can you come over here for a second? RACHEL Sure. [Rachel walks over to her and puts the coffee on the reception bench] JULIE Craving for caffeine are we? [Julie lets out a chuckle] RACHEL Something like that. What’s up? JULIE I need you to sign these release papers so Mr. Goldfine can go home. RACHEL Okay. [Rachel signs the papers] I’m just going to go give them to Mr. Goldfine to sign. [Rachel walks away leaving the coffee there, Julie accidentally knocks the coffee over and spills it] JULIE Oh no! [she rushes to make another coffee and then replaces it so it looks like Rachel’s same coffee, Julie wipes up the mess, Rachel walks back into the scene] I spilt my coffee all over the place! [They laugh] RACHEL These things happen. [Rachel picks up the coffee and looks at it] THE BEACH HOUSE/MAIN AREA [Ric and Belle are sitting on the lounge still] RIC I can’t believe Amanda acted like that. BELLE At least I know now who my mother. I can now leave the bay, pointless really, now that I’m here and I’ve already found my mother. RIC What do you mean? BELLE Well if things turned out the way they did like yesterday I promised myself I’ll move out of the bay because there’s no real reason of me staying here. RIC What, you’re leaving? BELLE Ric, I never had real intentions of staying in the bay. RIC So that’s just it? You found your mother so you’re packing up and leaving? [belle smiles and kisses Ric] BELLE It’s been nice knowing you babe. JAIL/VISITING AREA MORAG Okay explain it all to me again just to refresh my memory on how you’re trying to get me out of here. JOSIE Morag, a man owes me millions of dollars and hasn’t paid me a single cent. His deadline expired the other day and he could go to jail for over forty years for not paying me the money. MORAG What does that have to do with me? JOSIE You’re in here for at least twenty years, if I tell this man to own up and say that he killed Josh, he’ll most likely get the same term that you got, so he should get twenty years instead of forty. If he does this favor for me, then he wont have to pay me back the money. MORAG So he owns up that he killed Josh, I’m free and everything will be off my back? JOSIE Exactly! It’s risky, but it sure in hell should work. THE HOSPITAL/DR. HELPMAN’S OFFICE [Rachel walks in with the coffee] RACHEL Here’s your coffee you ordered. [Rachel hands it to him she smiles] DR. HELPMAN It took you long enough, what happened? RACHEL Nothing, just had to see a few patients, sorry for the delay. [Helpman drinks the coffee, Rachel smiles] I’ve came to a decision, on our situation. DR. HELPMAN Really? Is this the end of Rachel and pretty boy? RACHEL No, as a matter fact, it’s the end of you. [Dr. Helpman looks confused] Goodbye Doctor Helpman. [she smiles and walks away] DR. HELPMAN Does this mean I’ll be seeing your resignation letter on the desk by morning? [He smiles, thinking he’s won, Rachel stops, turns around, walks back up to him. She bends down and whispers in his ear] RACHEL No. This means I’ll be waving at you, as your body is being lowered into the ground. [Rachel walks off] DR. HELPMAN What does that mean? RACHEL Goodbye Doctor Helpman. DR. HELPMAN Rachel! What does that mean! Rachel! RACHEL! [He gets up but he begins to look weak, he places his hand on his heart, he’s having a heart attack, Rachel turns around and smiles as she watches him drop to the ground, she walks back over to him] RACHEL Do you think I’ll just stand here and watch you ruin my career? My relationship with Kim? I told you, nothing will get in my way! Nothing! If you think this is bad… You haven’t met my family yet! [Helpman closes his eyes, Rachel stands back up and she breathes heavily trying to take in what just happened, she runs out of the room] Someone help, Doctor Helpman had a heart attack! [Two nurses run into the room, Rachel looks at his body and smiles] It’s been nice knowing you Doc.
ldscott Posted March 28, 2006 Report Posted March 28, 2006 Oooh. Very creepy. Not sure i like this side of Rachel! Can't wait to read more!
Holly Posted March 28, 2006 Report Posted March 28, 2006 Great Work Drew!! :D It is excellent I can really imagine it happening. Not sure about evil Rachel though.
sevenpuddings Posted March 28, 2006 Report Posted March 28, 2006 Its great. I love evil Rachel. And Morag and Josie teaming up? Who could beat them? Can't wait for more.
Drew Posted March 29, 2006 Report Posted March 29, 2006 I know some of you think the character of Rachel isn't really what we know about her, but we've known her for 10 weeks now and hardly know anything but she likes Kim, hates Helpmen, an old friend of Leah's and doesn't like to talk about her family. So i thought i'll use those traits and give her a character boost. The explanation about her "evil" side will be revealed soon, i'm not totally changing the character of Rachel if that's what some of you are thinking Thanks for the replys BTW
Dean Posted March 29, 2006 Report Posted March 29, 2006 Fantastic. Josie! Morag! Evil Rachel! Fantastic!
Kimmy Posted March 29, 2006 Report Posted March 29, 2006 It's really good Drew! Sorry for not reading it before but I will defiently keep reading it now..I think I'm addicted You got really goos one-liners like RACHEL No, I heard you the first time! I’m not going around getting coffee for you like I’m your personal nanny! If you want a nanny go call Fran, I’m sure she could help you out. DR. HELPMAN Oh look, we have a comedian in the hospital. If you wanted to be a clown Rachel I think you should be working in the children’s hospital I loved the scene between Amanda and Peter because H&A never really explore scenes like that but anyways keep it up! Can't wait for the next ep!
aejdude Posted March 29, 2006 Report Posted March 29, 2006 Another brilliant ep. Can't wait for the next one.
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