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Adia

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  1. Thankies for your comments as well. You know I love your fics, so please keep on writing, You're awesome!

  2. Ooh great update! I'm very suspicious of this Petez character now... glad Johnny raced over at the end...
  3. Have read it all and I love! But Becky I say this in all your fics... why must you make me cry like so? Great writing. I loved when Ava answered the phone at the station, she is sooo cute. I totally did not expect Cam, Ash and Corey that was such a great twist... Can't wait to see more!
  4. I agree with SkyKat on everything. You're an amazing writer and I just love all the ideas that you come up with. I have never been so captivated by someone's writing since I read a book called "Scented Gardens for the Blind" by Janet Frame. I like the fact that you've introduced original characters. It brings another dimension to the story and it's always good to have a different perspective on life in the Bay. Breezes had chased the clouds, stirred the blades of grass and caused the flowers in the children’s flower garden to bob their heads like old-fashioned villagers in a busy village market dancing and curtseying in old-fashioned greeting to their neighbours. Great imagery there, love your use of lanugage. Poor Steven though... I felt a shiver go up my spine when I got to the end... Honestly ILM, your writing is great and I've equated you with my all time favourite NZ author, so believe me when I say how very talented you are...
  5. Sorry about your loss bay girl. Gosh, I love this fic so much, finally got to catch up! Great updates, I'm glad that Jack asked Martha about not telling him about the memories... her reactions are always great. Poor Irene, who would want to hurt her!?! I hope that it's nothing to do with the mystery woman. You have me so intrigued. Can't wait for more.
  6. Great update! I especially loved this bit... T.J nodded in agreement “And become respectable members of the general pubic, I mean public” Lol, I was laughing out loud. I wonder who this Petez guy is. You have me aching for more so please update soon!
  7. Love it! The last part was great, I'm glad they're getting together. But OMG what about Rocco? Can't wait to see the next chapter!
  8. Awwww, great! I love a jealous Johnny! I know what it's like to be stuck in a place with no computer... can't wait till your back so you can update again!
  9. Happy b'day Roccoluver... you have the same b'day as me lol. Great updates. Loving the Johnny/Lisa interaction. I almost had a heart attack when I read that she kissed Rocco! Can't wait for more!
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  11. This is brilliant Roccoluver! I love how Lisa is pushing Johnny's buttons! Please update again soon!
  12. I officially love you for doing a Johnny fic AAAND a Rocco fic! So yes you should carry on... Great start... Lisa is BAD! I would love to see how Johnny reacts to all the flirting...
  13. Yay! An update! Love, love, loved!! The first part of the chapter was great, I like how Milko encourages Sally to ask questions and confront people about their feelings. The Frank flashbacks were written really well. Really emphasised the last part... His Dad would always be part of his life, but the Fletchers were his home. There is such a sweet innocence about the way you've written the children in this story, especially Sally and Kane and the flashback Frank had... and then you've written an 'adult world', and yet all the same kinds of feelings and emotions and probelms are still relevant there as well. Lol, I hope that makes sense... And the kids worry about the adults and try thier hardest to make things better, that's just gorgeous! I always think it's sad how people lose touch with their inner child and their dreams... I'm so glad there is hope... Wonderfully well written chapter!
  14. That was so beautiful! I loved it! Jack ran his thumb across Martha's cheek, eliminating the tear, and looked into his estranged wife's eyes, to only see a sad and scared girl who needed help. Gosh that made me so sad. I soooo want Cam to just disappear. I haven't been myself in a long time, and Jack, you're the only person who can help me, you're the only person I want to help me." Awww, every J&M fans dream. Great writing Tasha. I hope you do more one shots soon!
  15. Great update, I just love Johnny's evilness! Update soon!
  16. Holy crap! My heart is just beating so fast after reading all that! Especially that last Rocco bit and OMG Beth! Great writing. Please update soon because you've got me hanging here!
  17. That was awesome ILM. I've missed your writing so much!!! I think it gave some really good background to what the characters are feeling and stuff like that. Especially Martha. I liked how you wrote about her brothers and how Hayley tried to make her blend into te crowd rather than upstage her, I think if anyone could take Hayley's crown it would be Martha! I liked how she befriended Cassie too. That shows how genuine she really is. The first paragraph was brilliant. The description really set the scene, I almost felt like I was there. Love how you write Kane I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  19. I think my heart almost ripped in two when I read he bit where Jack was holding his and Martha's wedding band in his hand. That was so sad! I liked how you described the drinking. Really well done, especially when Martha said she was self-medicating and then later Jack had a shot. Glad that Jason told Jack about Martha remembering. Soooo liking Jason right now! Amazing writing. Can't wait to see more.
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  21. OMG! Nooo, Johnny!!!! Awesome updates. You really have me hanging on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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