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Hmm, I'm wondering what Romeo has in mind ... I look forward to more & seeing where this goes. Well done, Red. Another great chapter. Love Carina xxx

I love the fact that Brax comforted Charlie & was there for her. An amazing chapter. Really well done. Love Carina xxx

This is exactly the reason why, if I get married, I am not having the hens the night before. The wedding in a couple of hours ... I wouldn't be up Another great chapter though. I must admit, I almost forgot Belle wasn't allowed to drink alcohol. Brilliantly written & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Did Heath just eat Romeo? Oh man, just when I was getting to actually like him again on the show! It was a funny chapter though. Plenty of humour there. Amazingly well written. Love Carina xxx

Wow. Just a beautifull written chapter once again. Lovely character protrayal, perfect dialogue & fantastic emotions. Really well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Wow, so they've managed to escape then ... I hope Charlie gets to them in time though. & Annie's dead? ... I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Beautiful artwork Jen. Absolutely gorgeous. I love the colouring & cropping. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Nice portrayal of characters there once again. That chapter was very well written. I am enjoying this fic so far. Well done. Love Carina xxx

This is an interesting start. I'd like to see this sort of thing on the show. Very well written & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

It's good that Charlie & Ruby seem to be making progress. Another nice chapter, written very well, too. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Oh no! Someone's dead ... I look forward to more & seeing how Belle, Aden & Nicole get themselves out of this one ... Love Carina xxx

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That was a lovely ending to a really good fic. Brilliantly written, as it always is. So very well done. An absolutely amazing fic & it was a joy to read. Love Carina xxx

Er, am I the only one who can't stand Xavier at all? Regardless of what Ruby & Romeo have done? I take pleasure in disliking Xavier ... Well written though, Red! Amazing. Great portrayal of the characters & their emotions. Love Carina xxx

Some great twists Zetti ... Another very well written chapter. I am actually loving this fic. I look forward to more. Brilliantly written, once again. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Poor Charlie. She needs to sort out her life at the moment though ... which is going to be tough. Loved Ruby at the start & their relationship. Fantastic character interaction. Well written, once again. Love Carina xxx

Gorgeous colouring, absolutely fantastic. Amazing avs, Amy. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Beautiful colouring on all of the avs there. Really well done. Absolutely fantastic. Love Carina xxx

Mia Oh no. That was an intense chapter. But really amazingly well written so well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Sorry. I did read this chapter earlier. Very well written! & I enjoyed it. Er. As for Star Wars movies, I saw three & didn't enjoy them .. but watched them because my dad did ... Zetti, you're not missing out on much. Love Carina xxx

I hope Javier doesn't cause any problems for Aden & Belle ... I loved that chapter. Such a sweet one too. Well done. Perfectly written as always. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

That was another brilliant chapter. Not liking Elliot at all. He's horrible isn't he? I hope they will all be okay. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

I loked Charlie & Ruby in that update. At least they've sorted some of their troubles out. Although it's still going to be tough. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Er. I was going to be first to comment, Tele. Honest. But I didn't get to sleep until 5am. Is a second comment good enough? Poor Betsy. But it worries me that Roman & Ella & the children will be targeted next. & Rola was just :wub: Perfect in every way, Tele. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Oh no ... Another greatly written chapter though! Fantastic, Zetti. Really well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx