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An interesting start ... good to see the Braxton's when they were younger too & I love the whole history of their life. So this is really amazing. Daryl taking charge of course. Love it. Well done. A great first chapter & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Another great chapter. Glad that Belle is looking out for Nicole. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Once again, I just loved it. I love the whole family interaction. Absolutely amazing as per usual, Tele so really well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Yeah .... just .... yeah. Um, so you are going to make everything okay, yeah? Right? Good! Update soon. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

I hope it's not an intruder & I'm hoping Charlie will be okay. On the other hand, if it is an intruder, Brax could get there in time & be the protective, handsome gentleman he is. I loved that update & I loved the way you portrayed & expressed Charlie's emotions there. Well done & very well written. Love Carina xxx

I loved Indi's emotions & thoughts about calling Romeo & the fact that she wants to talk to him, yet she doesn't want it to seem like she depends on him. Wasn't expecting you to kill off Marilyn but it was written extremely well with perfect emotions all the same. Dex & Indi's relationship, of course was fantastically written. Loved them supporting each other. A beautifully written chapter & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Joey! Wow. That was a good twist. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

You see that line right? Yeah, that's the one, the one above. Do you know that's exactly how your readers feel? But do you care? No. Of course you don't. & why not? Oh really? You want to torture us? Well, if that's the way you want it ... I could probably do a lot worse on my fic, you know ... But did you know just how amazing that chapter was? Yes? You do? Goody. That's officially a cop out for me leaving an essay for you which is quite convenient. Would you really hurt one of the children ... even I can't answer that question because I have no idea what you are capable of. But surely you're not that heartless? You're not? Good! Then kills someone like ... like ... Roo? Because you can't kill off Rob ... so Roo could take his place ... Update soon if you don't mind ... Love Carina xxx

Wow, Javier's obsessed. Can't make my mind up if Mattie has made things better or worse at the moment yet though. I look forward to more. Update soon. Another fantastic chapter, I loved it. Love Carina xxx

Hmmm ... it's good that Nicole's okay. Wondering how long she will be okay for though. Worrying. I look forward to more. Update soon. Love Carina xxx

I loved that update so much ... Rola! Amazing as always. & it was lovely to read more family interaction once again. Well done Tele & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Aha, Heath & stripping, being a nudist. & Dex! Good God. He needs to control himself, definitely, as they all said in that chapter. Brilliant again. Love Carina xxx

Awww, I just loved Brax in that chapter. He was lovely. Casey & Ruby in that chapter was nice to read too. I really enjoyed that update & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

A great couple of chapters there, sorry I missed one. Brilliantly written though as always. Character interaction & emotions was beautifully written once again, well done. Love Carina xxx

Oh wow, Jen, they are fantastic. & yay, a few of Aden & Justin there ... lovely. Absolutely beautiful & I love the colouring. Really well done. Love Carina xxx

Oh great ... now he may not even survive surgery. This is all we need! I look forward to more & you will make him okay, won't you? ....... You will? Good! Update soon please. Love Carina xxx

Wow ... erm ... just wow. That was a hilarious chapter ... good job that you put a warning there too Well done, an amazing update. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

& just when I thought Nicole was going to get away & then Gardy gets her again ... So thank goodness for Charlie really. A really great chapter, well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Liked Miles in that chapter. & I'm glad April & Xavier have Bianca & Gina's support. A great chapter. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Now I'm worried & am hoping that both Belle & Nicole will be okay. I look forward to more. Update soon. Love Carina xxx

I love the colouring on those ... it's just so beautiful, absolutely stunning. Really well done. Beautiful artwork. Love Carina xxx

What?! You can't do that! He was going to propose & that's just so sweet ... then Watson arrests him! How could you? Update soon please, very well written as always. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Loved Ruby being supportive in that chapter. Very well written, well done. Love Carina xxx

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