HighwayUnicorn

I really enjoyed that chapter. I love the name! Hopefully Liam and Heath will be able to be civil towards each other ... I look forward to more. Another brilliant chapter. Well done. Love Carina xxx

I love Darcy ... and I quite liked Heath in that chapter too. That was a fantastic chapter and I really enjoyed it. Well done. I lok forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Absolutely beautiful, Jen. Amazing artwork. Gorgeous colouring and cropping. They're just absolutely perfect. Really well done. Love Carina xxx

Well ... it had to be someone didn't it? And as long as it wasn't Aden, Nicole or Roman ... or the children of course, then it's okay. I feel sorry for Roman though. And I'm hoping that Nicole will be okay too. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Casey and Ruby was just And then Charlie and Braz too. Just amazingly well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Casey and Ruby meeting each other, that was just so lovely. Poor Ruby falling over though ... although it was a bit amusing. Brilliantly written though. I enjoyed that update. Well done. Love Carina xxx

I hope that Nicole is going to be okay now ... Surely you won't have her hurt? I look forward to more. Brilliantly written. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Oh okay, so that was an interesting chapter with Casey and Annie. You wrote it brilliantly though, really well done. I look forward to what happens next. Well done. Love Carina xxx

I apologise for not commenting sooner, I had a few chapters to catch up on there. All of them were so brilliantly written. Your portrayal of the characters is brilliant. And I love you style of writing in terms of portraying emotions as well. Really well done and I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

A couple of chapters to catch up there. Absolutely beautifully written! Although now I am concerned about what's going to happen next. Well done. Fantastically written. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

I love how you portray Ruby and Charlie's relationship in this story. It's written so beautifully. Well done and I really look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Gorgeous avs Jen. Lovely colouring and cropping as always. Just absolutely stunning. Well done. Beautiful artwork. Love Carina xxx

Okay, finally commenting. & it took a lot of effort just to sign in ... I can never think of anything else to say other than Rola I feel sorry for the children but it is the right decision. Right, well I would say update soon but I can't really seeing as it took me so long to comment. But I look forward to more. Another great chapter, well done. Love Carina xxx

Oh Casey ... I hope he'll be alright. & poor Brax as well. Brilliantly written once again & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

At least Heath actually wants to be a part of the baby's life. Charlie & Bianca's friendship is lovely to read. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Oh wow ... Indi! & Heath! That was brilliant. Such a hilarious chapter. Really well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Wow, so Angelo actually died in Belle's place? Wow. Brilliantly written once again. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Wow, so Annie really is his sister. I'm interested in seeing where you take this next. Really well written. Well done. Love Carina xxx

Wow ... that was a great chapter ... I look forward to seeing how it progresses ... Chax Really well done & very well written. Love Carina xxx

Oh dear ... brilliantly written as always though ... I look forward to more & seeing where you take this. Well done. Love Carina xxx

So I've missed a few updates there ... I'm so sorry. Casey & Rocco ... that was just too cute. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

A couple of really good chapters. Really well written. Wondering about the ending now ... Well done. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Whatever Charlie decides, I hope she'll be happy. I can understand her reasoning in not wanting the baby. Charlie & Angelo's conversation was good but they've not sorted everything out yet. Really well written. A beautiful update. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx

Gorgeous artwork. Beautiful colouring. Well done. Love Carina xxx

That chapter was brilliantly written. Really well done. I loved the interaction between Charlie & Ruby & then Casey & Charlie. Brilliant. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx