HighwayUnicorn

Penn is sick ... and psychotic ... I hope Nicole will be alright ... and I don't blame her for kissing Penn back ... she was scared ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx

How did I not know you'd updated? Saying that, when I've signed in, I haven't been on the fanfiction forum in a couple of days which might explain it. Er ... it's too good to be true at the moment and I'm thinking something bad is going to happen ... But in the meantime ... Rola I'm very confused as to the ages of all the children now though ... And thinking about their ages never occured to me until I dreamt about this fic the other night ... and when I woke up, I started trying to work out how old they all are. Anyway, yeah, it was perfect. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

I thought that chapter was brilliant! I'm hoping that Charlie will actually go to France ... I look forward to more. Well done. Carina xxx

I liked the interaction between Charlie and Brax there ... and she told him! It's good that he knows the truth now though. Carina xxx

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I liked it ... Charlie and Brax ... it was nicely written, well done. Carina xxx

Don't worry about the gap in updates Red ... I think I'm one of the world's worst updaters ... Brilliantly written once again though ... and I loved April and Dex in that chapter. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Oh wow. You updated and I hadn't realised. I'm really sorry. But another brilliant chapter! I loved the character interaction and portrayal of emotions once again. Well done. Carina xxx

Charlie and Brax's phone conversation! Fantastic! I loved it. Another amazing chapter, well done. Carina xxx

I like it so far ... I'll be interested to see you continue it and see where you take it next ... Carina xxx

Another good chapter. But now I'm prepared for something bad to happen. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Aww, Charlie and Brax! They are so cute. Another brilliant update, well done. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Oh no! When I logged onto this fic, it was on the last page and someone had already commented that Angelo had been killed by Penn so I was then expecting it ... but not like that. Amazingly written though as always Zetti. I am very worried for Nicole though so make everything okay ... I'm not going to talk to myself, I'm not going to talk to myself ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Try not to get too into it ... you'll be banned before you know it ... yet you'll still be expected to comment even if you haven't read it ... I get moaned at if I'm a few days late ... Even if your in a coma, you're expected to comment ... Trust me ... this is coming from someone who's banned all the time.

Yeah but you know I'm only joking ... you don't have to write if you're ill ... But you still have a go at me for commenting a day or two (or three) late ... I commented on this during Muse's performance! Do you know what that means?! I'm beginning to love Rola more than Muse!!! Which means an unhealthy and unnatural obsession! And they were the last headlining act over the weekend ... All I can say is it's a good job I recorded it so as I can watch them over and over and over again ... <sighs> But seeing as I'm banned ... I'll watch them instead of read Rola

Banned again, Tele? That's a bit unfair considering I've told you I'm ill ... surely that's obvious seeing as I'm not online on facebook? And all I wanted to do last night was crawl into bed and be comfortable to watch Muse perform but no. I knew that I'd have to comment if you'd updated. And you had updated. And I think I'm pretty good at commenting too ... literaly on almost every chapter ... which is brilliant ... considering you've commented on my fic once throughout the whole thing ... It takes effort to load everything up on the laptop when I am ill and feel like I'm dying! Have sympathy! As for the chapter ... Rola I really don't know what else to say to be honest. Just perfectly written as always and you had better not hurt anyone. I wouldsay I look forward to more (which I am) but seeing as I am still very poorly, I don't know when I'll next be online ... Carina xxx

Oh dear ... this is not good. I hope Charlie and Ruby will be okay ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx

I'm glad that Charlie seems to be okay. And I loved the conversation between her and Brax. Carina xxx

Okay ... so ... why did it take me so long to comment ... there really is a reasonable explanation for that ... I was abducted by aliens? I knew you wouldn't believe that! Okay, so to tell you the truth ... I've been ill ... still ... and I've been busy in the day (housework, cooking, etc) ... And in the evening? Oh dear ... I've been spending too much time in front of the tv, watching festivals ... instead of reading Rola. That doesn't mean you can ban me by the way ... Anyway ... Rola at Roman! Good for him though. Angelo deserved what he got (and a little bit more than that but I don't want Roman to get into trouble). Brilliantly written as always. And I look forward to more. Carina xxx

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I hope Nicole will be okay. Brilliantly written as always, well done. I look forward to more and seeing where you take this. Carina xxx

A brilliant first chapter, well written Steve. Dex! Enough said ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx

Oh no! I hope Charlie will be okay! And Braz quitting being a River Boy! Wow! Amazingly written, a brilliant chapter. I look forward to more and seeing what happens next. Well done. Carina xxx

I'm really enjoying this fic and I love the way you portray Ruby and Charlie's relationship in this story. I love the character interaction. Really well done. I look forward to more. Carina xxx

I loved the character interaction in that chapter, it was brilliant and light-hearted. Absolutely fantastic. I loved Ruby turning up and Brax and Charlie with the phonecalls. Just absolutely fantastic, well done. I look forward to more. Carina xxx