I say again, not a lot of thought went into this... It is a rather ridiculous fic - not for the reason of Robbie writing the eulogy, I'm sure I could make that plausible if I wanted to - but for the fact that it was just a random nonsensicle scene that I had in my head, and I wanted it out as quickly as possible to move onto other things... It came out a little worse than I'd hoped, which is why I removed it from that Lucas poem - that actually had some effort put into it.
Perhaps Beth's funeral was not the best subject to base a meaningless bit of slash on...
I actually woke up this morning (which is a feat in itself - i usually don't wake up til the afternoon) thinking that I'd like to write another fic on the theme of Beth's death bringing the Hunter kids back together... a serious one that's not just an excuse to have Robbie and Kim making out . Why, they might not even WANT to make out in this next fic! But then I hear you asking, what's the point ?
Well, if the snippet of dialogue in my head is anything to go by, it'll be centered around Robbie and what coming back to Australia means for him and his family (Tash and Ella)... I'm sure there'll be a Robbie/Kim scene in there still, but it would be much more focussed on their friendship and the unfortunate disintergration there of... Oh how I love my angst...