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That was such a horriffic chapter. My stomach feels all icky So... did Cooper find Logan before the cops did ...? Seems like if he was that messed up with blood on him, and after what he said... Poor guy... I'm glad that Colby tried to look after him... but jeez, I really don't know if he'll be doing any surfing today... I suppose there's no good way to find out that you're brother's dead, but I really felt for Roo. The thought that "everyone" knew before he did... ugh. I liked him dropping the honey. It reminded me of a scene in "Candy," which I love... Ooh, have you seen it? Is that why you named her Candy?? Speaking of, I'm gonna have to say that I wasn't a fan of Candy's voice over. It didn't really fit. But you're trying new things, and that's always good. Heck, ONE thing I didn't like out of 30 chapters isn't bad!

That's cool. I'm interested to hear more about Cooper. I think I could quite easily fall in love with him too, given the right circumstances

First of all, f*ck you Lara. Second, I'm in tears here... Those flashbacks were incredible - so perfect... and no one there to help him... *sniff* . I don't know what else to say

I got it! . I don't know if Logan's dead... though I suspect by the title of the fic that it's probably not going to end well for him... but I think it was a really bold move to take out the biggest personality first. I mean, this is the guy that you started the fic on. This is the guy who's the TV star - the others are just "copies" of him, in public opinion... To take Logan out, wow. It's really impressive though because, as much as he may be the star to the people in the fic, he's not really the star to those of us reading. We don't know much about him, other than he's an insensitive jerk and he pisses people off. Cooper has a story going on with Lily and Colby, and Roo... well, if I had to pick one star of this show, it would be him. It's an ensemble piece, I know, but if I HAD to choose . He seems to have the most going on in so many different areas. His defence of Charlie is probably the catalyst for the attack on Logan as well... Please don't kill Roo . He has so much to live for - Lucas AND Charlie!! Anyway, I've probably rambled on long enough... in short, it was a bold and excellent choice to go with Logan first. Of course I was rooting for Lily, but that probably wouldn't have made much sense... would have been satisfying though ... Hm. But it wasn't really her fault, if Logan DID trick her... in which case... Logan deserved it...? That doesn't sound like soemthing I'd say

*Curls up around Roo and purs...*

OMG! That's so cute. I was trying to be fierce

Oh Christ, Logan... I don't want to find out what those "sharp pains" were about... *cries* Is it wrong to be relieved that it wasn't Roo...? When he wandered off on his own for a few seconds, I was almost in tears . Don't hurt my Roo... That's right, I've claimed him! *swipes at everyone to stay away - hisses! >.<*

That was so frickin hot... This fic is great - every time I want something to happen, it happens! So awesome I think that Rachel was a little too happy about Greg's abuse being confirmed. Charlie needs more Roo hugs ... And I have a feeling that those threats of Greg's weren't exactly idle...

Oops! Sorry! I've got no doubt you explained that properly, this is just evidence of my sucky comprehension skills... Trust me, that was nothing like Lucas and Randy! Apart from the fact that it was Lucas, and a guy who's name starts with R... hmmm . Seriously though, these are very different circumstances and very different characters - even Lucas, you write him different to how I write him in ATC. (He's a lot less b*tchy in this ) You've got nothing to worry about! And besides, who could ever complain about two nice young boys makin out? I may be 'inspired' by you yet... Yeah, I did get that... I just think Lily's being a self-righteous b*tch . Great, now I'm going to see her being played by Stephanie Macintosh... *mutters* Stupid Skye...

Oh where to start... Okay, well I'm glad that Kim DID sing - we just didn't see it. Still counts . Colby's song rocked, as did the Andrew/Roo duet, when I had Roo singing it all Punk/Emo in my head . Very appropriate lyrics too, particularly that bit about finding a girl and settling down... Andrew's really not gonna like this, is he? Lucas and Roo - WHOA! I honestly didn't see that coming! Now I know how people feel when they read my fics, lol. It's very strange! But very VERY good . I can't believe I didn't see it coming, lol... *smacks self in the head.* That made me laugh so much . And isn't Logan the crafty one? When he said he was gay, I was like "WHAT!?" but then he was lying, as Logan does tend to do... found it interesting that Lily was so uppety after she was the one who's literally screwed things up. Jeez, if you freeze a guy out because you're ashamed of the fact that YOU SLEPT WITH HIS BROTHER AND ARE NOW PREGNANT! - then yeah, he is going to feel a little off about the relationship... Girls are so self-centered sometimes

Why am I always attracted to the gay ones?? *Hugs Roo* I cannot wait for Kim and Roo to double-team Greg and kick the crap out of him, but I'm wondering about that "other Greg" line... I'm sure it was just a figure of speech, but it's making me wonder... split personality ?? Probably not... probably just a jerk all the time but sometimes he's better at hiding it Aww, why isn't Kim singing?? We've had naked (and might I say "mmmmmm") so now all we need is singing! I loved all the flat white talk, hehe. Aww, Rachel and Kim ordered the same thing Nice to see Andrew again. I had to stop and think when I saw his name - it's been a while! And "Candice" threw me for a second. Darn fathers with their proper titles for troublesom children... Ooh and Colby. Who knew that Madge Wilkins would breed a ripped surf star! Look forward to more, as always.

I'm constantly in awe of this fic. It moves at such a perfect pace, and all the characters - new and old - are so real. I love it! I'm wondering if Rachel's going to tell Kim what's happening with Charlie, and if Kim's gonna do something about it... *cough*blood*cough.*

I haven't read this fic but I've seen that question mark and wondered why it was there myself . I edited it out for you when I moved your fic into the Library. If you need to change your title or topic lead in future, PM me or one of the other Librarians. If you have any other completed fics in the fanfic forum, please PM me or one of the other Librarians. That goes for everyone else too. It's really hard to know which fics are complete if no one tells us! Luckily I noticed the link to this one in your sig.

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreg ... I was almost ready to be understanding and say that he MIGHT really love Charlie, and Rachel WAS being a hippocrit... but then this 15 year old... Kim wasn't 15 Grrrrrrr... If there's to be blood in this fic, I hope Greg's is the first shed EDIT: OKAY! READ CHAPTER 20!! NOW I DEFINITELY WANT THAT PERVERTED A**HOLE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!! He's the frickin' sl*t... someone should remove his ability to be one... and then kill him... slowly -____- BRING ME BLOOD ADAM!!!!!!!!!!

I thought this was gonna be a slow chapter when I started reading, and then BANG! Catfight! . So many swears... so many tasteless inuendos... Nicely done!

There were many things I meant to comment on but I went to watch the Rich List half way through reading so... Mostly I remember that Mattie shouldn't be swearing! She's a good girl!! Then of course I say aww to poor little Charlie . Grrrr at Greg . I am not trusting this "relationship" one bit, no sir I am not... Perhaps Roo can go beat the crap out him if he finds out that something's up . Very excited about all the updates, and the Lucas/Roo interaction . Looking forward to the next installment!