beachside Posted October 9, 2022 Report Share Posted October 9, 2022 Glad Bree felt like she could trust Dean 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 9, 2022 Report Share Posted October 9, 2022 (edited) Question is though did Dean pay for the drinks or were they freebies haha It didn’t take Bree a lot to open up not even a offer of pizza but I guess if it’s one person you want in your corner it’s Dean he has the river boys on stand by I’m guessing Jacob will not be expecting them if he was going to cause trouble Nice writing just shame it’s a one shot Oh yes also I could see Ziggy being abit jealous of Dean and Brees friendship Edited October 9, 2022 by pembie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zara grace Posted October 9, 2022 Report Share Posted October 9, 2022 7 hours ago, pembie said: Question is though did Dean pay for the drinks or were they freebies haha It didn’t take Bree a lot to open up not even a offer of pizza but I guess if it’s one person you want in your corner it’s Dean he has the river boys on stand by I’m guessing Jacob will not be expecting them if he was going to cause trouble Nice writing just shame it’s a one shot Oh yes also I could see Ziggy being abit jealous of Dean and Brees friendship Hi, firstly thank you for your feedback. Your right if you want anyone in your corner it's Dean Funny you should mention Ziggy being jealous of Bree friendship with Dean because that actually my next one shot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 10, 2022 Report Share Posted October 10, 2022 1 hour ago, zara grace said: Hi, firstly thank you for your feedback. Your right if you want anyone in your corner it's Dean Funny you should mention Ziggy being jealous of Bree friendship with Dean because that actually my next one shot. Let’s see if you can make me feel sorry for Ziggy worse character ever lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zara grace Posted October 10, 2022 Report Share Posted October 10, 2022 50 minutes ago, pembie said: Let’s see if you can make me feel sorry for Ziggy worse character ever lol I'm not a fan of hers either, would rather Dean with Bree. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 10, 2022 Report Share Posted October 10, 2022 Look forward too your next story then Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 17, 2022 Report Share Posted November 17, 2022 Finally got around to reading this now we're a bit further along in the UK! Interesting scene. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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