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Just now, christine king said:

Great start. I'm guessing this is just a Brody/Phoebe/Justin story? I think you have to do like an intro so people know who's in the story? What's it about? What grade ect? What themes?

How can you get an info in the story also yeah it mainly Phoebe and brody and justin but because of an event  something in the bay will change

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1 hour ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Great chapter

Shocked that Phoebe told Justin that she didn't love her anymore in front of everyone. She should have told him in private instead of letting it out in front of people. Can't wait to see how he will react to it.

Update soon please xx

You have to wait to find out it not how you should think he would 

2 hours ago, Kristen said:

Great chapter

Liked that you brought Heath back.

Shocked Phoebe doesn't love Justin anymore I have a feeling she might have a thing for Brody.

Update again soon :)

Yeah Heath gonna play a major part in the story who knows another braxton brother might return and maybe she does like Brody

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