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Very brave of Heath to admit that to Brax. Hopefully a step in the right direction. A bit of a revelation for Katie too, that Kyle could do something so bad. That the sweet little boy she knew could have cracked and tried to hurt someone like Casey. Looking forward to the next chapter x 

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Great chapter 

Liked the thoughts and flashbacks 

Poor Heath!

Brax was just trying to help him.

I like that you've changed the name of this to the Braxton family toture.

Update again soon :)

 

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Great chapter Suzza! Thought the flashback and the 'what could have been' projections were really interesting. Feel very sad for Kyle, that he had the life that he did, and for the people that he's left behind who know they can't do anything to change that. It would be very hard to know that someone you cared about had been through something so terrible and that you'll never get to talk to them about it. Very sweet (and tragic) that Brax wants to see Kyle, even if he is in ghost form. That he's almost jealous of Heath (and what is essentially a mental breakdown!) Liked the flashback to the date too. Really can't imagine Kyle with Rosie! Looking forward to the next chapter x

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