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Really great start! That would be horrible for Heath! Thinking for a few fleeting moments that Kyle wasn't really dead, only to wake up and find that the nightmare of his death was really true. Poor Heath. Looking forward to seeing where you take this :wink:

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I really liked this chapter. I really feel for Heath and can completely understand why he doesn't want to go to the grave. It's all still too raw for him. Celebrating Kyle's birthday, now that he's dead, when they didn't celebrate before, is like rubbing salt in the wound. Poor Heath.

I would go with option 2. I like that one the most but they're all good :P

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