Guest Posted February 7, 2016 Report Posted February 7, 2016 Great start I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 7, 2016 Report Posted February 7, 2016 I love the set up to this, although things don't seem particularly harmonious between Heath and April...Looking forward to more! Quote
Ludub Posted February 7, 2016 Report Posted February 7, 2016 Great first chapter, looking forward to the next one. :-) Dex and Casey is interesting. Quote
JosieTash Posted February 7, 2016 Report Posted February 7, 2016 Cooooool start !!! Pretty BIG that Bianca and Harley are dead. i like Heath - my fave of the River Boys !! i'm going to enjoy this. Quote
Guest Posted February 8, 2016 Report Posted February 8, 2016 (edited) Great Chapter It was too bad that Darcy's first day of school didn't go too well, glad April got through to her though. Glad Heath got off his butt and got a job at Angelo's. I loved the bit at the end. I look forward to more Update again soon Edited February 8, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Inactive User Posted February 8, 2016 Report Posted February 8, 2016 Great start, Phoebe! Had been catching up with the last twochapters Looking forwards to the next chapter xx Quote
JosieTash Posted February 8, 2016 Report Posted February 8, 2016 (edited) Totally get that Heath doesn't want to go anywhere ...cos of the "ghost" of Bianca !!! LOOOVED Heath taking BOTH phones away during dinner ....or trying. Funny that he thought Darcy was making up words !!!! Edited February 8, 2016 by JosieTash Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 8, 2016 Report Posted February 8, 2016 Loved April playing stepmother and glad there was another reason for Heath's behaviour besides laziness.Looking forward to more! Quote
Guest Posted February 10, 2016 Report Posted February 10, 2016 (edited) Great chapter glad April's first day went well. Liked the mention of Evelyn and Oscar. I look forward to more. Update again soon Edited February 10, 2016 by Kristen Quote
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