Sabrina Posted February 10, 2014 Report Share Posted February 10, 2014 It's great to see Jack and Martha so happy. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 23, 2014 Report Share Posted February 23, 2014 (edited) Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next update again soon Edited February 23, 2014 by Romeo&Indi Forever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted February 23, 2014 Report Share Posted February 23, 2014 (edited) Good chapter. I thought something mysterious had happened to Jack too, when Martha woke up to find he wasn't there. This is a nice build up to the trouble that is coming.. Edited February 23, 2014 by pembie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 23, 2014 Report Share Posted February 23, 2014 Great chapter. Loved it Please update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 23, 2014 Report Share Posted February 23, 2014 Martha seemed quite tense at Jack being missed but maybe that's me reading too much into it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 1, 2014 Report Share Posted March 1, 2014 Great chapter poor Roo and Martha hope they work it out update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted March 1, 2014 Report Share Posted March 1, 2014 Great chapter Awww! I hope Roo and Martha will sort things out soon Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 1, 2014 Report Share Posted March 1, 2014 Loved Alf's reaction to seeing Martha but woah at the encounter with Roo.Looks like there's a lot of bad feeling there, interested to know the whole story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted March 2, 2014 Report Share Posted March 2, 2014 (edited) Wow it seems Roo will have a lot of making up to do with Martha. There's loads of bad feelings there for both of them. And plus Roo will need to open up to Harvey now, because I think he feels left out of the loop now. If she's not honest with him I think they could start to have problems . I think Martha will be ok opening up to Jack. But in saying that maybe this could be the start to the lead up for Martha's money troubles somehow? Either way Jack and Martha's honeymoon happiness is well and truly over now I think. It was very cool reading and seeing, what Martha and Roo's reactions might have been like if they ever met each other, Well Done and I look forward to your next chapter. Edited March 2, 2014 by pembie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabrina Posted March 5, 2014 Report Share Posted March 5, 2014 Chapter 2 - I thought something had happened to Jack too. Chapter 3 - I can't wait to find out the whole story between Martha and Roo. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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