Guest Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 Great chapter glad Martha told Jack everything I hope Jack forgives her eventually update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 (edited) Oh cool with Jack making Martha leave, makes me wonder if that was Martha that was knocking on Roo's door a few chapters back. As in a sort of flash forward type thing happening in that chapter, that we just didn't realise at the time. I think Roo would be the first person that Martha would think to go too even if they were fighting. At least Jack now knows about rhe loan shark's goon/ Martha's twin. What a double piece of bad luck for her that is. First to find out that she has a twin, and then finding out that he works for a loan shark You just couldn't write good stuff like that, Oh yeah you are, Awesome. Hopefully Jack and the other cops will be able to track him down before anything bad happens to Martha. Look forward to more this story is heating up Edited June 1, 2014 by pembie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 Wow at Martha's secret.Intrigued to know what happens next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabrina Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 Chapter 8 - I wonder how Jack will react? Chapter 9 - I'm glad Martha told Jack the truth. I can understand Jack wanting Martha to leave. Hopefully Jack will forgive her soon. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 12, 2014 Report Share Posted July 12, 2014 Great chapter Zetti I missed this fanfic but glad it's back update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted July 12, 2014 Report Share Posted July 12, 2014 Awesome chapter, Zetti Update soon please xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted July 13, 2014 Report Share Posted July 13, 2014 Somehow I think Jack will end up having a very busy and hetic day ahead of him...... It was good that he was firm with Roo over Martha. Good to have this story back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabrina Posted July 13, 2014 Report Share Posted July 13, 2014 I'm glad Jack didn't do anything that would've hurt Martha. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted July 27, 2014 Report Share Posted July 27, 2014 Great chapter Update soon please Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 27, 2014 Report Share Posted July 27, 2014 Hmm...is Hazel going to turn out to be significant?Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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