Inactive User Posted May 20, 2012 Report Posted May 20, 2012 Great start Looking forwards to next one. xx Quote
pembie Posted May 21, 2012 Report Posted May 21, 2012 Dexter giving Xavier a lift home on his handlebars was a amusing image as was Xavier faling onto to his lawn when he got there. Dexter doing a playschool show on TV sounds like the ideal job for him. Getting a date with Dallas was a added bonus for him there. I wonder if he will go for it. That driving examiner seemed quite harsh. Oh dear looks like Xavier will be taking the V8 out for a spin. Look forward to the next part. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 21, 2012 Report Posted May 21, 2012 Wow, Xavier going after Dallas is an interesting idea and I love the byplay between Xavier and Dexter.But oh Xavier, at lying about passing his driving test and wonder what was up with Dallas at the end. Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted May 21, 2012 Report Posted May 21, 2012 Thanks for the comments Jarlie, Pembie, Beezzz, Red Ranger and Aden_Belle. I'm working on the next one, and it should be up soon hopefully. Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted June 12, 2012 Report Posted June 12, 2012 Just to let you guys know I haven't forgotten about this story. There will be a new update soon so stay tuned. Quote
Inactive User Posted June 13, 2012 Author Report Posted June 13, 2012 Fab chapter Update soon please xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 13, 2012 Report Posted June 13, 2012 Loved the ending, lots of things made me smile:April on roller skates, Xavier and Dexter worried about getting on Heath's bad side, Xavier killing the car.Thanks for sharing! Quote
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