Everything Happens For A Reason (by Zetti) - comments

[Zetti]

Uh oh! Romeo's for a beating Ironically!

This is an interesting story, I get a good idea that the restaurant is busy and they are rushing about serving customers, no time for long discussions about how they feel.

Angelo jealous I see a slow burning story coming up, they're always the best.

Hope your days get less tough x

Thanks hun and I really appreciate the facebook chat last night *hugs*

That wasn't at all a bad chapter ... it was brilliant. It was nice to see a lot of dialogue occurring.

& it really allowed the emotions to be portrayed perfectly & beautifully too, well done.

Love Carina xxx

Aww thanks, I really hate writing too much dialogue, but glad you liked it x

Not a bad chapter. It's really brilliant and well-written The emoticons were beautifully written.

Thanks Sarah!

[Miranda]

Thanks hun and I really appreciate the facebook chat last night *hugs*

You're welcome

I really hate writing too much dialogue, but glad you liked it x

I LOVE writing dialogue. I HATE writing descriptions and things. Just sayin.

[HighwayUnicorn]

You're like me ... I dislike writing dialogue & I prefer descriptions!

xxx

[Zetti]

Two peas in a pod then Carina

Thanks again Miranda

[Miranda]

You're like me ... I dislike writing dialogue & I prefer descriptions!

I see a way we could all help each other....

[Zetti]

You're like me ... I dislike writing dialogue & I prefer descriptions!

I see a way we could all help each other....

Well I need the help! Just ask hun. I will be happy to.. its the least I owe you x

[Miranda]

Then, you get to study the boys in detail and describe them, while I can write lots of dialogue. Result!

Meanwhile, Red can write fight scenes. We are a team

Edited May 2, 2011 by Miranda

[Zetti]

Then, you get to study the boys in detail and describe them, while I can write lots of dialogue. Result!

Meanwhile, Red can write fight scenes. We are a team

Deal! Lets stop clogging the thread up... I dont want to scare anyone off

[Zetti]

Just a quick update to let you all know that I will be updating tomorrow or Friday x

[Miranda]

Good, we're all looking forward to it