Zetti Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Brax is Casey's father!I really didn't see that coming.Casey staying with Nicole could be interesting. Loved the girls' talk between Nicole and Belle.Woah, what's Justin's connection to Steve?Really looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks Red I am glad you didnt see it coming, means I wrote it properly! Wow. Justin & Steve ... I sense trouble ... That was actually amazing ... perfectly written. Belle & Nicole's chat was lovely too. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Thanks. Can always count on you to comment God, this is interesting!! Really intriguing. So that makes Brax... 33? That could fit in. Makes me wonder if this is the real story in the actual series Well done Z, this story is really taking off Thanks Miranda! Means a lot coming from you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 God, this is interesting!! Really intriguing. So that makes Brax... 33? That could fit in. Makes me wonder if this is the real story in the actual series Well done Z, this story is really taking off Thanks Miranda! Means a lot coming from you (bows) I really thought I was being stupid and hadn't noticed who Casey's father was in the previous chapters Doh! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 I wanted to keep it a secret so that you all would be like WTF! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 I wanted to keep it a secret so that you all would be like WTF! That's the best way to write! And I have no excuse for not knowing really, after all the hints you dropped. I'm dopey. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Ooh, its all winding up to a climax. Exciting. I like the bit about Aden and Belle being interrupted, thats what keeps readers hooked. I was reading about that writing technique, its called witholding or something so, Justin is free. or is he? And what the hell's he doing burgling Nicole's house? This fic has just got better and better, its been snowballing. Well done you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 24, 2011 Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Oh my gosh ... I loved every word of that chapter ... Justin! Aden & Belle were so lovely as per. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2011 Hmm, so I'm taking it everything went okay with Justin and the sting operation then?Aden and Belle seem to have worked things out.Be interesting to see which way Casey and Nicole go.Looking forward to seeing how this ends! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted April 25, 2011 Report Share Posted April 25, 2011 Ooh, its all winding up to a climax. Exciting. I like the bit about Aden and Belle being interrupted, thats what keeps readers hooked. I was reading about that writing technique, its called witholding or something so, Justin is free. or is he? And what the hell's he doing burgling Nicole's house? This fic has just got better and better, its been snowballing. Well done you It was meant to be so that Steve didnt suspect anything x Ta hun x Oh my gosh ... I loved every word of that chapter ... Justin! Aden & Belle were so lovely as per. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Thanks Hmm, so I'm taking it everything went okay with Justin and the sting operation then?Aden and Belle seem to have worked things out.Be interesting to see which way Casey and Nicole go.Looking forward to seeing how this ends! Thanks Red, just re read the final chapter. I will update it tomorrow when I have amended it x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted April 26, 2011 Report Share Posted April 26, 2011 That was a brilliant fanfiction. The end was really sad but beautiful. Everything came to a close & although not everything was a hppy ending, it worked well & was realistic. Amazingly well written throughout. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2011 Woah!I really wasn't expecting you to kill Heath but you did it really well.Nice that Justin was happy for Aden and Belle too.Thanks for sharing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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