Red Ranger 1 Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Slightly confused:If Jack doesn't know Martha's pregnant, why was he talking about her having morning sickness?Good that Gina and Jeremy are taking things slowly.Nicole seriously put her foot in it with Tony and she would have been out of line anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzard18 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 (edited) Slightly confused:If Jack doesn't know Martha's pregnant, why was he talking about her having morning sickness?Good that Gina and Jeremy are taking things slowly.Nicole seriously put her foot in it with Tony and she would have been out of line anyway. Remember that Martha told Rachel that she and Jack have no knowledge of parenthood etc. - let's just say that Jack pretty much has zero knowledge about pregnancy (or in this case, the symptoms which can indicate pregnancy) - he personally noticed Martha's morning sickness and perhaps thinks it's something else Jack first brought up the subject back in Chapter 69. The whole thing sounds a bit awkward, I know, but hopefully I answered your question. Edited January 23, 2010 by blizzard18 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 ^Just about got it:They're calling it morning sickness because she's being sick in the mornings but they don't realise it's actual morning sickness... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Some good stuff in there.I liked Tony reassuring Jack and Nicole's apology.Good that Martin's okay, I'd forgotten about him.Had a feeling Jack was going to overhear something, be interesting to see how he reacts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 I loved Jack's reaction to the news, glad he wasn't angry about Martha keeping it from him.Good how it spread around the Bay so quickly, that made me smile. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
callyha Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Wow! loved reactions to when Belle got back lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Richard has a son?That's going to make things interesting.Loved Rachel dragging Tony around the baby shops.In fact everyone seemed exciteable in that chapter.Especially the ones with two X chromosomes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Woah, when I read the previous chapter I thought Richard didn't know he had a son.But if he'd never met him, it makes sense he never mentioned him to Charlie.Liked Leah and Hugo's flirting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
callyha Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 Wow. Loved it! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 Wow, that was a long chapter, lot of characters and lot going on.I wonder if I'm misjudging Warren but he did seem a bit psychotic at the start there.(If it turns out there was something suspicious about Jill's death, he's dropped.)Leah's confusion was nicely written, good characterisation of Irene.Wasn't sure about Aden pushing things with Tony but it worked out fine and I liked their man hug.Some nice comedy bits with the girls.Looking forward to seeing where you take this next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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