Red Ranger 1 Posted June 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2010 Had to smile at Aden asking to have one of the twins.Good that everything seems to be going well for Tony now, shame Belle missed out on the course place. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Oh man, I loved VJ interrogating Hugo and Leah.And Brendan blurting everything out again.Lucas and Nicole's banter was amusing and so was the blokes' rivalry.Although the preview suggests it's not going to be fun and games for long... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Oh, there was some fun stuff in there.Loved Xavier giving Brendan his orders and Belle's panic at losing him.And the family wearing "Team Holden" shirts and Hugo thinking he needed to ask Gina's permission...So, guessing it's now next chapter when the fun stops?Kind of looking forward to it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted July 4, 2010 Report Share Posted July 4, 2010 The competitive banter was well written, I'm really looking forward to the actual marathon itself. Is there any Tachel baby stuff coming soon? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzard18 Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Is there any Tachel baby stuff coming soon? To answer that question, all I will say is Rachel (and Tony) will get a mini storyline of their own involving the pregnancy, but it will be during the worst timing due to a tragedy that is coming up in the next couple of chapters which will affect all the residents. Hopefully I'll get the next chapter up by the end of the week Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted July 6, 2010 Report Share Posted July 6, 2010 Great chapter. Liking this fanfiction More soon pleaseeee x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted July 7, 2010 Report Share Posted July 7, 2010 Thanks for answering my question Blizzard, I'm looking forward to the next update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Didn't expect Roman to be the person to get injured, It will be interesting to see what you decide to do with Roman now. The mix of seriousness and funny banter is always nice to read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Loved the teens' banter about the bet.Oh gosh, Roman.Hope he's all right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2010 Oh gosh.I know it didn't look good but I wasn't expecting you to actually kill Roman.That's going to be hard on everyone.Tony's reactions were nicely written.Hope Rachel and the baby are going to be all right... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.