Jump to content

After the Fire (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments


Recommended Posts

Interesting one-shot.I kind of liked the tension between Aden and Nicole at the start even if it seemed to remain unresolved.I liked what you did with Geoff and the byplay between him and Alf was good. The opening explaining what happened to everyone was interesting as well.

Link to post
Share on other sites
  • 1 year later...
  • 1 year later...

Interesting story. It was good to see getting burn't in the fire hadn't stopped Geoff from making a return, and the very reason why he felt like he needed too was to be with Nicole was very sweet.

I wanted to know what was next for Aden but as they say that will do for another story

Well Done

Link to post
Share on other sites
  • QUIET ACHIEVER changed the title to After the Fire (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue.