Red Ranger 1 Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 Interesting one-shot.I kind of liked the tension between Aden and Nicole at the start even if it seemed to remain unresolved.I liked what you did with Geoff and the byplay between him and Alf was good. The opening explaining what happened to everyone was interesting as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted March 20, 2010 Report Share Posted March 20, 2010 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! I LOVED THAT!!! it was just so cute Aww I loved it!! Great fic! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 I loved it, Tele! Another amazing one shot. You write so amazingly well! <Tries to steal your talent> Really brilliantly written, well done. x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted October 14, 2013 Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 Interesting story. It was good to see getting burn't in the fire hadn't stopped Geoff from making a return, and the very reason why he felt like he needed too was to be with Nicole was very sweet. I wanted to know what was next for Aden but as they say that will do for another story Well Done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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