nicoleee23 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 wow! this was amazing, i actually cried you are such a talented writer, thank you for sharing this story with us!! what was the name of the song?? xoxo Quote
tessalove Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 Aww wow!! That was soo good! Poor Belle I felt so sorry for her! I love that song! It was weird i put my iPod on and it started playing! Lol Loved it so much!! El xx Quote
LauraPhilly!! Posted November 4, 2009 Report Posted November 4, 2009 omg, omg, oh my God!!!!!!!!!!!!! Georgia, this is absolutely amazing writing!! Wow, that first chapter was just....wow!!! Never has a first chapter left such an impact on me before! Brilliant! Just brilliant!! Really looking forward to your next chapter!! x x x x x Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 5, 2009 Report Posted November 5, 2009 Wow!Just brilliant.I was not expecting that ending at all.Even though we never saw them together-and they haven't even met yet-I can really believe in the bond between Belle and Susan, the generosity of Susan letting Belle know what had happened to Aden and the generosity of Belle wanting to do whatever she could to help Aden's wife and child.Utterly brilliant. Quote
Georgia Posted November 5, 2009 Report Posted November 5, 2009 omg, omg, oh my God!!!!!!!!!!!!! Georgia, this is absolutely amazing writing!! Wow, that first chapter was just....wow!!! Never has a first chapter left such an impact on me before! Brilliant! Just brilliant!! Really looking forward to your next chapter!! x x x x x Well, this was going to just be a one-shot, but because of the responses... I might actually extend this into a longer fiction... if you guys want it. Your opinions are all welcome... there's no point writing it if you don't want to read it Quote
matticus01 Posted November 5, 2009 Report Posted November 5, 2009 wow..... wow... wow... wow Gee That was utterly brilliant... I think everyone basically said what I wanted to say so that sums me up! well done, you really are such a talented writer Quote
mbi615 Posted November 5, 2009 Report Posted November 5, 2009 Brilliant one-shot Georgia! The lyrics are just so fitting to the story and yeah, everything's just great! We have to write short stories right now, and I'm so wishing I had your writing skills coz they are amazing! Quote
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