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That was really moving.You captured the helplessness both Ruby and Angelo were feeling beautifully and gave a little hint of hope at the end that Ruby was going to get through it.Marvellous stuff.

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That was brilliant, really moving.

At first I thought Annie had died, because Ruby said no more times with Annie, and a blonde man (who I thought was Geoff), had come to her room. So it was even better when I was wrong, and it was Charlie.

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This one-shot was so moving. It was so beautifully written. You described Ruby and Angelo's feelings so well. I could almost feel their pain.

Brilliant one-shot. :D

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Thank you so much, I'm glad you all liked it so much. Thank you for the beautiful comments. Reading them is bringing a smile to my face.

Writing and posting this has made me fall back in love with writing again, and then reading your comments has made me wonder why I ever stopped. Thank you again.

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