LAURZY! Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 Good start! I really wanna know why she had to leave Aden!!! lol Looking forward to reading more Quote
amz89 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 good start this could be interesting, belle has a bubba, nice. Quote
Georgia Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 Yay ! You wrote it ! I told you that I would read it when it was posted ! That was a really good chapter. I'm intrigued and waiting on the edge of my seat for the next update. Just one thing... if it comes down to Aden choosing between Nicole or Belle, it has to be Belle. Sorry, just getting in early and stating my opinion. She's come back from the dead ! They can work through any issues that brings up ! Plus, I always thought of Nic and Aden as brother and sister. But amazing chapter Quote
amz89 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 Aww wow whats going on here?? Whos they?? Cant wait for more. Quote
Georgia Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 You so have to kill off the person that wants to hurt Belle. He ruined their happiness. I feel so bad for Belle. She has a baby with the man she loves, but she can't be with him anymore, and she now has to start all over again, with no one to help her. It was brilliant writing, as usual. Can't wait for the update. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 Hmm, this is getting intriguing.Interesting start, looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Quote
tessalove Posted August 24, 2009 Report Posted August 24, 2009 This is very interesting! I really love it! Its confusing, I really can't wait to find out what's going on Update soon! X Quote
Lise Posted August 25, 2009 Report Posted August 25, 2009 That was a good start. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Quote
matticus01 Posted August 25, 2009 Report Posted August 25, 2009 Beautiful I love the way your writing this, absolutely amazing, but who wanted her gone in the first place? hmmm update soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 25, 2009 Report Posted August 25, 2009 Ooh.Some interesting stuff in there, like the way you wrote Aden and Nicole together and Belle and Nadia with all her stories about Aden.You get the feeling Belle has to go back home for Nadia's sake as much as her own. Really intrigued by that opening bit and how it fits in.Is Liam having a daughter relevant?The dates don't seem to be right for him being the father of Belle or Nicole's daughter...Did Aden and Nicole adopt Liam's kid?Or is it somehow connected to why Belle had to go into hiding? Quote
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