jdoddy Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Oh boy, they're breeding like rabbits... my thoughts exactly.. great update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Ohh...I liked the scene between Ella and Gardy but then you went and did that to her and Roman.How much have they got to go through?!Nice bit with Nic, Geoff and Mike afterwards. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TelephotoMarigold Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Ohh...I liked the scene between Ella and Gardy but then you went and did that to her and Roman.How much have they got to go through?!Nice bit with Nic, Geoff and Mike afterwards. Muhwahwaha..... <Evil Cackle> *coughs* Don't worry... I'm sure things will turn out alright.... Well almost sure..... Muhwahwaha..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 awwww great update as usual!! xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Loved that first chapter with Miles as the voice of reason.I was worried you really were going to split them up for good but then you made it all all right.And I loved the second chapter for completely different reasons:Aden and Nicole getting hold of completely the wrong end of the stick just had me laughing all the way through. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 that made me laugh all the way through!! nic and aden's phone call had me laughing my head of!! update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Really sweet chapter, I loved that whole conversation between them at the start.Nicole phoning them up and them stringing it out for as long as possible was funny as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Nice chapter, hope everything works out for them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 That was a sweet chapter, This Fiction has been really nice now they have sorted the 'Gardy Problems' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 That was a nice chapter.Loved Nic asking Geoff not to let her say anything "Nicole-like." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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